Fallen_Angel_26
Misaki time to get up Nao can u go wake your sister up before you both are late again our mother asked.
The conclusion was simple - if I fight directly with him, I will die.
Muttering to himself, he says, "She might be in the back. Amelia seems to be the type of person to hide in the most inconspicuous of places to avoid attention, and the back seems to be a great place in my opinion."
All that bore the enchantment of the enslaved would be pulled towards this space and transported to another world. Silk made sure it wasn't anywhere nice. Normally Silk wouldn't be able to pull this off but with the energy from the workshop it was easy.
The two of them were silent for the most of the trek back to Vale, something that Aaron grew increasingly accustomed to over the years. With one glance at Jackson from the corner of his eye, he knew something was troubling him. It wasn't until they reached Vale when Aaron broke the silence.
"I'm actually waiting for someone." Ana replied and look at the girl beside Akira.
this book has more writing spells then sentences at this point. misspells grammatical errors. it's too funny at this point. it's so bad that it knocks 3 whole stars for me in the writing department. grammarly is a thing my guy. now story wise it's pretty good aside from a couple of messy prospective changes and time switches and flash backs that mess with the progression. it's been Gucci as far as I have read. now character design wise I have to say it's not the best. alot of npcs are too superficial too childish in their reactions and too immature. a whole kingdom ruined by a couple of words and two incidents? a strong warriors who has fought for the majority of his life gets knifed super easily by his son no reaction no retaliation. there has been a lot of such interactions and events that feel forced to progress the storyline or to make a plot in the story. the world background is pretty good aside from history being a bit lacking since we get told about it once and it's totally forgotten and how the history was told to us via an info dump which is one of the worst ways to describe or flesh out the imagination of the world to the reader. any ways tldr fix the horrendous misspells and mistakes and the novel would be Gucci
Hi, why does the novel, stopped 2 months ago? Is the novel dropped or the translator is busy or went into some retreat?Please continue on translating the novel, I really really liked it.
Up till now its good waiting for more update
Like the over all story great female lead
"Very good!" Lady Oba said in good spirits. "Now, those two meatheads will never know what hit them"
I love the story so far. The characters are enjoyable. The background is good. The only thing that is bad is the grammar. If this improved, it would be very close to a 5 star.
