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Started reading and can assure will go great.
amazing way to start a good story. I can't wait for things to unfold itself
this is a surprise... I am the second person to review the story... this one was a bit on the emotional side, i even shed a few tears while going through the story... but nonetheless a great story... I loved it... I recommend the whole series... hope more people read it...
It was ok. Just stupid though that the female karakters always accept a wh*re alpha but the female can’t have sex if it’s not with that alpha
I really liked this book as well as your other books and I loved how Tessa gets her happy ending and second chances.
Nice book. It’s quite cool
Despite my general preference to avoid gender-bender stories, which often lean towards ecchi, absurdity, or lack of impact, this particular tale captured my interest due to its unique setup - an older man transforming into a younger, enchanting dark elf. Typically, such stories feature a teenage or young adult male turning into a human or their own age, just with a gender swap.
The transformation in this story is significant, as the main character (MC) grapples with her new identity in a profound way. Unlike many other TS stories where the MC quickly adjusts and lives happily with their new gender, MC's Japanese uncle-like mindset struggles continuously. The MC experiences a constant sense of incongruity, even after the initial shock wears off. This internal struggle to adapt and accept her new body is what makes the story stand out and intriguing.
The MC's likable and relatable personality adds to the appeal. She's not overly dramatic, heroic, manipulative, or naive; instead, she displays vulnerability and evolves throughout the narrative. Her journey with her newfound companions, particularly the forming of a close-knit found family, is endearing. They support and care for each other in a wholesome, platonic manner.
For fans of stories centered on family bonds and friendships, this tale is a delightful choice. The dynamics between the characters are warm and genuine, without any awkwardness due to age differences.
In summary, this story is heartwarming, filled with unexpected depth, and an enjoyable read. I wholeheartedly recommend it. And let's not forget, the character Montana is simply adorable, leaving no room for debate.
"Please add a tragic tag, (ToT)
I truly enjoyed this novel, despite finishing only the first arc. The ending left me emotionally moved to tears.
The main characters, MC and ML, shouldn't have to endure such heartache. It was heartbreaking to see the MC depart from this world, leaving ML alone.
Why does the author have to inflict such pain on me? *sigh*
What I also appreciated were the well-developed supporting characters. They aren't one-dimensional; they play meaningful roles throughout the story and hold a special place in my heart."
This is incredibly cute. I really adore both the main characters and I'm rooting for their immense happiness. So far, there hasn't been any drama, which is perfectly fine since the romantic aspect is charming and endearing.
The concept is intriguing, a coming-of-age story featuring a zombie少女 who seeks yang energy to maintain vitality, with a balanced mix of horror, comedy, romance, and thriller elements tailored for young adults. However, there are a couple of issues in the storytelling:
1. The male lead, initially described as sweet, unfortunately turns out to be a controlling figure. Despite her direct requests, he displays possessiveness, distrust, and even stalks her by monitoring her phone and invading her privacy. His efforts to confine her and limit her interactions with others create a problematic dynamic. It would have been more compelling if the heroine were emotionless, content to use him for sustenance, but the author seems to want readers to empathize with him.
2. The main character's background doesn't match her premise. As a zombie with extensive life experiences, one would expect her to be wise, knowledgeable, and have a vast network. Instead, she is portrayed as an 18-year-old with limited life阅历, which makes her seem relatable rather than符合 her initial portrayal. The love interest's admiration should have been depicted as a fleeting adolescent infatuation that she easily dismisses, given her calculated and pragmatic nature.
Overall, the execution of these aspects falls short of what the premise promised.
Into the blackness!
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