The novel is interesting and nice you all should try it out
Hi, this is the author, I want to say thank you for being interested in my novel and I hope you enjoy reading it. As an new author I hope you can leave me feedback on what I can improve, is the chapter slow? let me know! is my grammar terrible? let me know!I read all comments and appreciate anyone who gives their time to read my novel! Thank you in advance reader-nim!
10 Chapters in so far and the mother seems useless.. Great1. There is some errors in punctuation that needs a bit of work, but that does not get in the way of the story and I expect them to be flushed out, they are easily spotted and not a bother to the story, the story progression is a bit fast but not much to talk on, definitely going to read the novel again when there's enough chapters and information to go on. the level of detail is acceptable altho I do get lost in the scenes at the start, the protagonists seems like a well planned up character with some thought into it. I am a fan of the genre of either a veteran or a strong individual reincarnating, this type of book is not a bad read or a best book title but it is something I would suggest a look at you might not like it or even hate it. (god I hate walls of text)
loved it and loving it. I really really hope you keep making more chapters
I know this book might seem similar to others you’ve read—maybe it even shares some familiar tropes—but let me assure you, it’s not the same. This story has a real sense of direction, so it might feel a bit slow at times. That’s because it’s not just about constant leveling up, blowing up planets, or seducing people (honestly, I don’t even know how to write that last part, so you’re safe there!). I’ve put effort into building a solid plot, so please be patient—you’re in for a lot!
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We made this story for the WebNovel Rising Star challenge!It is an epic story about a VR championship match in 2081, which is a year away! In 2080, virtual reality is stunningly up-to-date! The players fight it out in the Chinese-language PVP MMORPG Eve, and the devious hacker, Zero_Nocturnal, threatens to overthrow the world's natural order! Oh no!Can Xi and Mitsuru and the clan's they are in, Nocturnal, which was no relation to Zero_Nocturnal, and Fictitious_Roses, who are another Chinese-language clan, make it to and even win the PAX Eternal 2081 'con's ¥65,000,000 prize!?Find out in this stunning novel with a focus on fast, character-based action and a low-Sci-Fi universe, that is original to Web Novel!The main character, Xi Huan, who plays the character Otter_44351147 in the virtual reality PVP MMORPG, must fight for survival against the nefarious entity known as Zero_Nocturnal, who has a kill count of over 150,000! Can he stop Zero_Nocturnal and win the PAX Eternal 2081 convention's ¥65,000,000 grand prize!?
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Hey author, I love your work and am looking forward to the next chapter, also do you plan to create a discord for more character illustration?
The best novel ever, but if you wanted artwork like a comic you can visit webtoon.
Definitely a unique story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.