Good, very good. I'm want continuation,......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It is a book with an interesting narrative. Although there are three or five small details that disrupt the flow, they are not that disturbing. It's just that the time jumps are not a good alternative way of moving from scene to scene. I would have preferred a little description of the journey.I wish you success! Write lots of chapters, okay?
hey I love your book but i wanted to know if this is harem or not would appreciate the answer thank you and keep posting all the best for the book
The author has gotten a lot better in his writing. I wouldn't give the story a 5 star just yet, but since there seems to be some trolls giving 1 stars in the reviews, I'll give it a 5 to even out the rating a bit more. Definitely a good read, but the reviews reflect other people's opinions (including mine) so you shouldn't knock it until you try it!
I started reading this on a whim when i had a spare 5 min, hours later i finished devouring volume 1! I was very surprised with this story and obviously hooked from the start. The writing is great and just the way the story is told made just keep on reading. I have so much to say about this it's so hard to actually put in words lol Thank you writing this, and keep up the good work!
The concept is interesting, the characters are unique, and the grammar is quite good. There are only slight issues with flow and repetitiveness that should resolve as the author gets into the swing of the story.
"I wish I could, his atrocities are horrible but I simply can't spare the men. We are still barely running the heavens and also we wouldn't know where to look. He has yet to be identified" Michael said sadly
"Hmm, Claudia-chan?"
"Harvey are you alright" a feminine voice yelled through the door
While Luffy, Itachi, Sanji and Zoro were speaking Usopp and Franky approached and introduced themselves to Itachi. After the introductions Luffy begins to share the food which Hancock had made for him.
"Estimated casualties reaching up into the hundreds, Boss." Spoke Tony's new AI, Friday, "Emergency Services have been called in, but they're meeting resistance."
"I know she does." Naruto said, eying Natasha as she pinched Lila's cheek dotingly.