I loved it!!!!! No words really
i wish there was chapters about her and Raymond the second prince... he seems better
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Plot line does make you feel curious. Only came after reading reviews. Glad did so. It'snice and interesting. World background is nice as well.
The story is great so far, though I would like a little more regarding the poor necromancer. I have a problem with the author using the word testemant way too often and they often mistake gun for spear but otherwise an enjoyable read
Love this so much. After a long time I got to laugh so much deep from my heart. Zhouzhou is hilarious and innocent. Thank you for the hard work authors
The action is absolutely there, I'm Loving it, and the character names are absolutely beautiful, Phineas reminds me of Phineas from Phineas and Ferb, it'sunkown if this is authors idea or not but I love that touch to the novel, thanks for the read Author San
The start is kinda rough but it got a lot of potential just keep writing till the impurities vanished. And don't use so much "He
there are lots of question that come in my mind when i read the introduction and the 11 chapters of the novel, for example- who are those people who started this project of two life, are there still any humans left outside the game world, and many more quetsions.The novel looks promising but then again, it's only 11 chapters at most of this review so I can't really judge the book yet,The book has potential and I would love to read the answers of my questions in future updates.
Honest score : 2/5Tl;dr MC is the biggest cowatd in the entire galaxy. World was good, characters were good, story was somewhar going somwhere but right when we focus back on MC inside the civilization everything becomes meaningless.Honestly the start was boring then it got good when I read some character development specially on MC side where he was supposedly becoming more of a veteran and bloodthirsty as he could awaken his memories; however after that, after the fight in the wood where he finally acted more like a man fighting against a wolf that almost got his arm; I had kept on reading further but it is just so damn bleak.The MC turns back to the biggest coward on planet Earth you’ll ever see, even after a spike up on his cultivation after a war expedition around chapter 200s~ where at one point he mentioned he won’t hide anymore because supposedly he’s become OP; during an interuniversity tornament you notice he has not changed one damn bit.Somehow he can have good fights when it is against monster and all then when it is against students he only knows how to hide, doesn’t have his supposedly veteran aura anymore that he has against beast. To be clear at this point I cannot be sure anymore if it is whether he is just truly that big of a wuss or he is going back on his words about not needing to hide his strenght because he also needs ressources.I am starting to understand this less and less as I read on because somehow the character develpment he had just gets nullified, at least that is how it feels to me as he awaken more and more of his veteran memories and skills, not only he seems to be weaker but more importantly incomparably timid.And it was clearly mentioned in the story at one point, the city and its organizations are seeking continuously promising youth to nurture and there isn’t even a clear explanation on why he has to hide his strenght as such while many others are just so open about it.It’s often read in the novel’s words how of a hero not afraid of pain he is but this MC is just a damn coward that cannot fight like omg I’m running out of words on clearly how embarassing it is when you have just read how awesome he is against some beasts in the forests then once back in the civilization he gets thrashed by some random university youth because supposedly he isn’t using the fighting style he prefers, which is to hide, like when did he had to when it was against the beasts though ??And also how is he somehow able to promote the ultimate style while doing as he does ? For some reason you read spectators comment about how good what he did was, I mean thank god for these comments because without them I truly would have been able to comprehend in what way what he did was different than how others did or that it was meaningful in any way and of course the system counting it as a win (successful promotion) is beyond me.I am only so angry because the world building was good, the characters were good too but the MC himself is such a massive pain that I would have prefered to read the life of any secondary character in this novel; the novel wasn’t ruined by anything else but the protagonist itself, it makes me so angry.Translation quality, update stability 5 starsStory development 2 starsCharacter design 1 starWorld background 4 starsOverall 3.4
If I could say what this is, it is a "masterpiece," it is the best sports novel in web novels. Although the system is OP which people complain about, it isn't that bad as in football you could still win or lose, he worked for it through training and rewards. Plus there are many factors that are included also. The character development is unique in a sense but is refined, I just hope that the MC doesn't date a gold digger in the future. The updates are constant, in which it is updating almost every day. The background of the world is the same as our real world with some real-life figures in the beautiful game. The character design is also really simple, I just hope that he can do stuff like recaps of what character looks like and their current stats. Overall the story is pretty good, although I don't want him to play with the DR Congo national team. Unless they get a huge boost in the squad which is probably going to happen. But I don't want him to play at AFCON which is not as popular as the Copa De Americas or the EUROS. But overall the story is perfect and I hope that it goes that way in the future.
book is meh, its obv a copyim more annoyed that another week of *last weeks* title finally getting chapters, then WITH FOUR OTHER EDITOR PICKS ALREADY a different novel gets jammed im on a fridayfollowed by the thought, some other novel probly just got cut with no warning so favorites can be played/money can be chased...