kylo_stekreo
OK story lots of grammatical errors, name confusion
is it going to be a sequel???????
I really loved the book. I wasn’t happy with Thea’s deep seated revenge, but once her character changed l became a fan.
It's very interesting so far, can't wait for the next one!! Do you have any social media that I can follow?
Love the story. The author is a genius. It was never boring and so unpredictable. Every chapter is fascinating and brilliant. Every character added in every chapter makes it more intriguing and interesting. Can't put down the book when you start reading! Hope to read more of her works.
I am the bone of my Sword.
Steel is my Body and Fire is my Blood.
I have created over a Thousand Blades, Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life.
these authors need to stop making interesting concepts harem ffs
尽管在剧情上不算出彩,但这个故事以其独特的趣味性吸引人。如果你喜欢看主角从底层一夜暴富,且一路顺风顺水,毫无挫折,那么这个故事或许适合你。我给的评分较低,主要是因为过度使用了陈词滥调,特别是对于主角设定,他几乎不费吹灰之力就能让女孩倒追,没有过往的情感纠葛或心上人,但他始终按兵不动,这让人感到有些不自然。
另一个问题是作者对已有设定的忽视,特别是在后期,为了给战斗增加紧张感,避免主角过于无敌,他开始改变之前已阐述的情节。这导致阅读体验上的混乱。此外,翻译方面也有问题,角色的代词频繁变化,甚至在同一句话中,让人难以确定他们的性别。由于作者极少描述角色外貌,读者必须反复阅读才能理解情节,这感觉就像在读未经润色的机器翻译文本一样。
does anybody know how to read offline? download chapters?
I like it.. it is a light read you can read if you just want to chill. No heavy plot etc
Eagerly waiting for more chapters. Please update more often than once or twice a month!!
Yes she fell for him in the previous timeline without being forced or manipulated. In the current timeline he basically manipulates her into loving him again because he knows everything about her. She falls in love with that fact and his overwhelming talents. Also name calling? Seriously are you 13 year old? If so maybe you should be reading other media.
