Hey there, author here! This is my debut novel!First and foremost, my story is incredibly slow paced! I mean that, seriously. So if you're looking for something fast paced and action filled, this isn't the story for you.Secondly, if you enjoy nothing but overpowered characters or the trends from cultivation stories, eg; faceslapping by chapter 3, "you're courting death
5 star just for the guy that was writing a petition in every trial novel. happy for you my guy.
TBH I really like this genre of novel. it's one of my favoritesbut Translation quality dropped greatly, It's using MTL with little a bit of editing to make it a passable read.and the most disappointing one is since the recent post is totally discarded the editing.now it's pure MTL, so I think to save your spirit stone and go read the MTL. (MTL have more chapterThat all.p.s. don't believe me? Compare it yourself.p.s.s. Use comparing program
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Peltivierre makes the daring choice to kick of this series with action at the start instead of a more subtle character introduction scene. Since there are so many elements to introduce in the beginning, showing the story by narrating how the MC became a hunter may have been a more effective way to gather the interest of the readers. Unfortunately even after starting the series, the chapters only consist of non-stop action from chapter to chapter instead of focusing anything on character-building, world-building, or story development.There are a number of grammatical errors where past and present tense are mixed up, which is quite jarring. There are also some instances of throwing in future tense as well.One way to improve this series would be to incorporate more imagery, describing the various sensations the MC is feeling. It would also help to describe his emotions and feelings in detail, so readers could connect to him more.Since the MC spends a lot of time, more detail could go into describing survival in the wilderness. Thus far, it’s heavily glossed over.Although this series starts up decently, it quickly comes to show it has nothing but action to substantiate it. I don't know how it changes later on, but it lacks a lot of substance.
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It is a requirement to read this or else you aren't a true NoveLover. Now stop stalling and get this in your library.
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There's only one or two novels with this plot here in Webnovel. I wish it would get picked! And besides unlike the other one, this one doesn't have portals or the likes (hopefully) instead it's in a modern, normal(?) world.
.........................................................................................................................................................................................The level of novels presented on the site has deteriorated. Sub-standard novels are chosen to be translated. This is a good novel, but I do not think that it will be selected.
Had some potential in the beginning(a little) but ultimately became too cliche and, well, just flat out boring. Characters are pretty much the same as usual, and pretty much everything about this is cliche. It could of gone places but it was just too freaking cliche and boring.
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Kinda stupid. Not sure why you would want the girl who hated him for something that’s not even his fault in his harem. He was a kid, and he was forced to do something, and she hated him for it. Lame.