I am no novice when it comes to the Xianxia genre. I have read so many novels in the genre and consider myself a connoisseur. And believe me when I say this novel can compete with the best of them. What the author has done is phenomenal the world and the characters and the lore are so enriched. Wang Wei is up there with the best of the best (the only bad character trait he has that boarders on juvenile is his grudge against his grandfather on his mother’s side, for how intelligent he is it comes across as ridiculous).This novel is darn near flawless and is Leagues above your favourite Xianxia novel if you are reading this review then it means you are curious trust me when I say invest your time in this amazing novel and you will be well rewarded. just a shame I didn’t discover this after it had been completed as waiting for the next chapter is agonising. Oh another point of contention I want to raise is that this novel should be number 1 in the power rankings and all other rankings on here. I have read all the other top 10’s and this novel is far superior to them and should be higher.
BEST CONCEPT I EVER KNEW! The customization of the world and mc is just so lovely. This gives me the satisfaction I always get from typical LN but it also gives me a sense of refreshment with the uniqueness of the mc. I recently discovered her other works which are super good(tho this is still my fave). Pancakes Witch is now my favorite writer T-T
The story is pretty decent with its's unique slice of life like beginning that is quite refreshing as it's not filled with drama, much to my liking. The pacing of the story is pretty good too. The farming and family like structure is pretty refreshing to read with a FL alongside the premise of a conspiracy running in the background.The writing quality like punctuations and spacing needs a little improvement but the rest is fine.
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finally someone posted this novel here I know you're not the owner but thanks.
time to use audioplay to read it my eyes hurt
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37 five star reviews. Lol. Pretty easy to tell the author deletes reviews. Man, I always come to novels to check out the 2-3 star reviews because they’re usually the most honest about what a novel is usually like rather than the 5 star bot spam “this novel is great! XD “ crap. What a shame that I won’t read this novel at all because the author has 200+ chapters but only 36 reviews that are all 5 stars lmao.
Dialogue and scene progressions are honestly quite terrible. Wish fulfillment fantasy is whatever, interesting premise, but very poorly executed. author needs to do more reading to improve their writing quality.
wonderful story. it just pulls you in. each chapter makes the story better and better. you just get drawn into the story as you keep reading. i think spelling errors and grammatical errors can be ignored since they are found in almost every book.
anyway. this sooks to be a promising book.
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Nice novel. Nice writing quality and story development. Character design needs a bit more work. We need to know a bit more about the other characters AKA his roommates. World Background is overused so I gave you a 3. Very nice novel though. You don't come across this types of novel very often.