Nice premise, reading about a villain definitely has tons of potential, but this isn't a villain, it's just an edgy powertrip fantasy.Also, "lol" has no place in a novel, especially not if ou want it taken seriously.The world background is good, the little we know of it anyways, seems like other planets are populated, and the whole hero vs villain dynamic has a lot of potential, as it always has.I'll be stopping here however, no point reading more when i already think the MC is pathetic, not because of his killing or his god complex, but because of how he talks, how he acts and many other things.
It gets very boring after a 100 chapters. .
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Its ight, I can guess the development of the story line as the leader of hoplites civilization suddenly disappeared must have a connection to this world he dropped in too, I also wonder how he'll fight when his ammos dwindle out. Either he finds more escape pods of his creemates ඞඞඞඞ or that of the aliens. And he'll then use their ammo and weapons, or that he'll find a facility that is connected to the leader of his civilization. Anyways just a retard trying to act smart
I really liked this and also I'm gonna pause because I wanna read it when it hit 60 chapters so it will take long for me to finish it so yeah also please keep it up and yeah
Full of repeated plot lines. I don’t care which book came first or second. But I see that there are shït tonne of repeated plot lines. What do u expect a immortal cultivator who has immortal body to do in modern world? Even if they self imposed to not steal or resort to criminal activities, there are lot of ways. But, it’s China, so strut ur stuff in front of old acquaintance or exes, go to the antique shop, have something to do with makeup, oh and find a rich family to cure them of something....I bet there will be stone gambling too. Things I like: MC is not a teenager or young adult that looses his shít next second a 2D side character comes. And love the daughter character. Author did a good job of padding with words.
It’s really a good novel. Starting is really good and have won my interest completely. I am really looking for more updates and different Hindu mythology’s leading this novels world.
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it's a must read book, the author has done a brilliant job in defining characters and the Background. once you read it you will come here for more.
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J'ai lu jusqu'au chapitre 6 pour l'instant. Je vais pas mentir c'était un peu compliqué à lire jusque là, je m'explique : Le fait que tu n'écrive pas quand le point de vue change c'est très déstabilisant (il y a certains endroits où j'ai du relire deux voir trois fois avant de comprendre que ça avait changé de point de vue).C'est tout ce que j'ai trouvé que vous pouvez changé pour que ça soit plus agréable à lire, le reste : la sortie de chapitre est bon, le personnage principale est intéressant (j'aime bien le fait qu'il soit intéresser par l'histoire et la stratégie), le développement de l'histoire est assez classique, un système d'invocation, quoique assez OP, il peut littéralement rester pour toujours dans une grotte et jamais sortir pendant 5 ans et construire son armée puis sortir et faire son propre royaume ou autre puisqu'il peut avoir eau et nourriture à l'infinis.Le fond du monde pour l'instant je ne peux rien dire on en sait pas encore assez.Donc dans l'ensemble, histoire assez intéressante pour l'instant avec pas mal de potentielle même si un peu compliqué à lire.**: je suis d'accord avec l'autre review, essayez de lui donner quelque chose pour qu'il ne soit pas porter H24 par son soldat. Je veux dire, d'accord on est dans un autre monde et la technologie est pas très évolué mais le protagoniste doit quand même avoir une vague idée de comment faire un fauteuil roulant, il peut très bien le faire en bois ou alors allez voir un forgeron, ou alors des béquilles ou quelque chose d'autre pour s'aider.(Je sais pas si vous connaissez mais si non regardez sur google Jin Ohtomo de tokyo ravens assez badass avec sa canne et sa jambe de bois, d'ailleurs Tokyo Ravens très bon anime je le conseille, tu peux peut être t'en inspiré ou alors avoir une idée avec ça.)
I'm so confused the author sometimes uses "you" instead of "I" for some reason and the female mc is always called little guy and sometimes chris it's confusing as **** and I for one can't continue reading.story is great tho