I read to chapter 155 and you're completely right, the writing and grammar is atrocious I had to drop it because I was sick of correcting minor issues in my head as I read and going back to piece together the story. Is there a better translation somewhere?
Right now at chapter 200. The story could use someone who’s romantically interested in Cheng as a form of …not rival, but someone to show Yan that she is not the center of the earth. So far the mc is putting in a lot more work than the fmc and it gets regarded as natural by the whole novel…Even tho the romance is sweet.
Erg, Merlin, really, so lame on the naming.
No more updates??? Waiting for them. If you won't updates I won't read anymore chapter after reading the current chapter 30
Nooo!!!!! Not even a kiss till the end!!*Energy_depleted Definitely 13+ Lmao
Dear author we really need to discuss about certain issues. The age gap of ml and fl is acceptable if u think that fl transmigrated at age of 22 years. The actual problem lies after 80%of story. The main story is till 80% then the children's stories start. I'm sorry but jier and Chu qi? Seriously? Child grooming and pedophilia. Serious case of attachment issues. I dropped after this happened. The age gap is not the major issue but the initial interactions between them changing like that was unacceptable. The rest of the story before was ok but I wouldn't read this again.
This is a good read, hope there will be an update soon
Extremely biased review from the author here.
Initial few chapters may seem slow but it picks up very fast later on.
Slow romance. The ML will appear and will definitely help FL, but with hilarious results.
Pease read if you want an intelligent female lead, who is not always thinking of revenge but wants to have a very fulfilling life. After living well when your enemies are struggling is the best revenge, right?
i like the story as its in a time where the customs where outdated and its interesting knowing what it was like in that time as it just rings my bell trying to find out the mystery of how it was like and what's going to happen later on in the story oh how interesting its going to be in the future of this book
I have high hopes from this author, I absolutely loved his previous book. From the title and synopsis, it seems it'll be a more dark and down to earth than CrimsonWhite.
The concept of Outcasts is brilliant and the writing style is top level. I won't reveal anything about the plots but I must say this that the main protagonist's character development looks far more better than any of the characters. Strange powers, the brilliant plot designs along with overall world building that has so much potential to surpass many of the top novels. I hope that you get contracted soon or accepted by webnovel if you ever apply for the contract. Well done and keep going. Thats's it...
hilarious read verry highly ahaaahahahahahah