its a good story. alot of spelling errors. needs more in depth explanation on things. story ended too quickly. could have been a way longer book! good effort!
p.s. their adopted daughter should have turned out to be Elijah's mate! could do a book 2 about that! just a suggestion! :)
Got me hooked from the first chapter, update more!
She is sawing a group of white creature,
Sawing di sini apakah maksudnya Seeing kak? Atau kosa kata saya yg buruk?
love it :)
Good, but not overly so. There are a few instances where the main character (MC) goes slightly out of character, but it’s still manageable.
When the plot involves the rebellious Kyubi and the Ryuchi Cave, the MC tends to act out of character, which can be quite annoying. However, if you can skip these parts, it’s still fine.
The MC is smart and has a bit of a humorous side. At the beginning of the novel, you might find the system frustrating, but by the end, you’ll understand why the MC harbors such intense feelings towards it. There’s no romance, no harems, or any other clichés, and I personally appreciate that (since I dislike romance in fanfics). The MC isn’t fond of killing, which could be seen as either a drawback or an advantage, depending on your preferences. If you enjoy Naruto fanfics with a spy MC or dual identities, you might really like this one.
The term "preposterous" would aptly describe this novel. The start was somewhat bewildering, but that's where it began. It then devolves into a repetitive sequence of miscommunications, as I've only reached chapter 100, and the number of misunderstandings feels excessive.
Initially, the story was endearing and humorous, eliciting sympathy for the main character after about 40 chapters. However, the novel loses its comedic touch and the protagonist's dramatics become grating, as the misunderstandings reach a breaking point.
Tsk tsk. The first guy replied to u is such a poorly cultured brother.
Some body gotta recommend those d*mn novels of the sadistic b*st*rd Jee Gab Song to him.
Especially those Chinese novels which r surprisingly good lying at rank 700-1000 with 1000+ chap and a "harem" tag.
Someone gotta break this guy's dream.
Is this good to read?
D*mn, this is literally the best of genre (non-human MC) but the author discontinued it cuz it wasn't popular enough. What tf were his readers smoking
IMO writing style sucks since around ch.220. Present tense was implemented incredibly poorly.
Wow... the readers here once went mad from waiting for chapters...
It feels like I have stumbled upon an abandoned asylums psychiatric ward.
Anyways, good news this novel is finished translation with 158 chapters. Find the rest on novelupdates
Essa é minha história preferida, sinceramente. Gosto muito de como todo o romance se desenvolve de forma pacífica e sem grandes mal entendidos desnecessário. Simplesmente tenho vontade de ler novamente, pois não encontro outra tão boa. Super recomendo se você gostar de um romance tranquilo e sem mal entendidos. Com certeza não vai se arrepender.