hello author love the novel btw can you please let me know which Ai dose you use to help you write the story, thank you
This novel is a pretty decent read but there are some aspects that really bothered me. 1) The dialogue. Listening to kindergarteners and elementary school kids interact would be more interesting than the social interaction in this novel. It's severely lacking in flow and feels very "basic" as another review said. 2) The MC himself. His decisions felt so frustratingly dumb, you'd wonder how the guy is a grown adult. His combat master almost died because MC wasted time asking questions when he was instructed to run away. They had just finished struggling to defeat one wolf and the rest of the pack was coming and MC was asking dumb questions like "Isn't it just some wolves? Why do we have to run?" They only survived from luck. Another time, during the tournament, after catching the enemy who had been shooting at him, he threw the guy away instead of finishing him off. This was during a battle Royale, mind you.In regards to the grammar, I have no complaints and the plot itself looks interesting. Just these two things made the novel difficult to read for me.
I like how it got like 5 million votes on energy, was number 1 on the rankings for months then just got dropped. gotta love this app....
It starts out, as most Chinese novels do, with a downtrodden, out of luck MC who suddenly receives good fortune in the shape of a wizard's hat shaped Virtual Reality helmet. The good point is that he needs to work to gain skills that can then be applied in real life but... it feels that his power progression is a bit rapid. On the other hand, the story is very well written and the emotional scenes are conveyed terrifically. It will be interesting to see how well the story eventually develops. I must commend the translator for such a good production. The use of language and expression are perfect plus the writing is enrapturing and drawing. On the whole, i recommend reading it for a bit of a Sci-fi / Wuxia twist.
Really slow. Puts to much detail into things that don’t even matter. English is a bit off, not bad though.
can't reccomended. the writing is amazing, the story is exceptional. it has an enormous amount of potential. and i want desperately to read more, and i want desperately to reccomend it. but it's been 5 months now since it was updated. i invested money into coins and read daily to keep up, hanging on to every word, only for the the author to stop posting, at first unstable posting, on and off, and then just permanently off. i can't reccomend because you'll get addicted, and then be left hanging.
From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolute enjoyed the first five chapters and can’t wait for more.Hoping this isn’t dropped is my wish.There are so many questions, yet not enough answers. Only by reading will I find them, anyways, this is an absolute yes.
more fake op harem garbage. should be a legal requirement to tag your work with either harem or not harem
Very nice novel. Love how the plot keeps on progressing every chapter hope i can see some actual romance between rose and Zhao Luo oreven zhao luo and si chen lol
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Chandu is a good writer and this novel proves that. Not only is the story development done perfectly but the MC makes the LN more realistic and better. BTW this was Dragonim.
The first chapter gives out as little as possible and it pulls you in and keeps you interested to read on more and more. I feel like it's a bit early for me to say anything about the character but I have a feeling that I'll end up liking the MC. Just a gut feeling. Amazing writing, amazing story, and world-building is just *chef's kiss.*Good luck to the author!