Great plot! Amazing character, nice Title and hooking cover.The story got me, addicted, this is the most-read work! Not to miss by any. You're a talented author. I enjoy your work.recommended:),
*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur. Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;.Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;.Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5
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This mc is the worst even after living 3 lifes he couldn't figure out that cultivation is not everything plus i hate the fact that he is always hiding his cultivation like at first it was good bc he was weak but now cmon, then he goes all crazy bc of shi but couldn't even respond to her feelings and as matter of fact he acts like it NEVER happened ???
34 chapter and i can't stop reading:) very good(little grammar mistakes but easily readable) 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140(
This is a great novel, loved the characters and their interactions, really reminded me of other great novels of the same genre, but Stardom has its own taste. Hope you concontinue with the good work!
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Unique plot and storyline, use of words is beautiful, and character development is superb. Five stars without effort ‼️
Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooooollllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeee. Novel, chapter one seems interesting, so I might as well click the second chapter.
It's really good and,give it a shot and it will definelitely catch your intention.Brion is improving good and the universe is written well.I expect great things from this novel.
I am sorry that i need to give such a low evaluation. I tried to read it, but my head srarted hurting while reading the first two chapter.I read novels for entertainment and to build a world in my mind while reading these stories. if i want to immerse myself into the story, it needs to have a basic level of grammar and story telling quality.I also read comments about this grammar problem and that it gets better with the chapter as the story develops. But i needed to stop reading, because my head could not take it.If possible could you please rewrite the beginning, so that it reflects the real quality of the world you build.I would really appreciate it and hope your stories get traction and your writing improves by leaps and bounds
The start is quite compelling. The novel begins in medias res, so you're thrown into the litrpg world right away. Skills, levels and stats occurr from the very beginning. The first narrative arch is mainly about Helial and his little sister Lumia.Things liven up soon enough. As the first adventures unfold, you immediately grow fonder of the main characters.I would recommend this novel for its enthralling plot. The flashbacks and the humor are the strong points. (Lasagna for president).The only weakness are the secondary characters in the second narrative arch (as well as Vidio in the first one). It's not like they're not well-written, I just personally didn't appreciate them much. Maybe it's just the main character who outshines them