Recibe daño mental con solo leer esta historia está bueno todo eso lo del harem y su futura destreza sexual Pero esta lora me dejó un trauma mental espero que el autor se deshaga De esta maestra de secta bestia
The grammar is great, the story is well written, you end up imagining as you read. the start was intriguing and amazing, I recommend the story to any of you
Rushed. Thats the biggest probelm. MC gets everything handet to him at the Start. SSS+ abilty, all the girls and huge plot armor. The characters all feel bland and there is literally no world building what so ever. Dropped at chapter 80.
If you are here, please give it a try, it's good(I think) and I'm still trying to improve, so I'm sure it'll get better.thank you for reading.
was searching something like this for so long Je suis content d'avoir trouvé quelque chose de génial, je vais le terminer en une nuit! ⏱️?
I dont know how can someone be so shamelles tu put a novel with this rubbish grammar with locked chapters,it hurts my eyes and english is not my first language , trash novel
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2.4 star is my real review but ı wıll give it 1 star because it doesnt deserve 4.5 rating at all. Mc is plain stupid and his logic is ex. flawed. All side charecters are poorly written. So called emp of country or his retainers doesnt have any ıq at all. Any way ın my opinion this novel ısnt worth to west your time on it.
Writing quality could do with a bit of work, especially with punctuation marks and all. Overall nice one hopefully, it doesn't get dropped.
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i vomited when i read it.....i want to decend to mortal world to bash whoever wrote this....???????????????????????????????