Surprise surprise, the MC ruins the novel. Shocking right? This guy lacks common sense, doesn't know how to communicate, and just lost in his own world.It's like having all of Legoland all to yourself but the only thing you create from it is a basic one story, one room house with a flat roof with all of the brick masters standing there waiting for you to ask them questions.Verdict: Dropped
This is actually a pretty good novel for the trial read. I wouldn't say its the greatest but at the same time better than the rest of them. Imma give this a 5 star to balance out the idiots who just voted a 1 star without reading but in reality its prob a 4 star.
When I read the description for the novel, all I'm hearing in my mind is the song of Bob the builder.... It just Bob the builder all over again and again and again.... ? ? ? ?
One of the best novels in my library. I finished reading in 1 day how can such a thing? I wonder if I should have expected more chapter.
This novel is inferior to other novels,just an opinion for the time being likely to say that this need a efficient imagination inorder to have a quality essentialy to readers.
I don't mind reading slice of life novels but this is too much. 200 chapters in and it's only been two days in the novel. just makes it too slow. it was around chapter 30 when they were at the old age home and made plans to have a party three days later and now we are around chapter 200 and it's still not at the party. also don't like the fact that he knows of three people who want kidnap and r*pe his wife and he just guys... meh I'll teach them a lesson if they go to far.
really promises to be great, don't give it up, but all in all, I would like to see mc as king or at least some general I can't wait for him to come and show others his power, for example in the fight with a dragon
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Just can't wait for more chapters ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I love the writer’s writing style, it’s unique and it has a certain style to it that others can’t imitate or copy. The writer also makes titles for every chapters, and they’re always so interesting, catching my eye every single time. Other than a few gramatical errors every now and then this novel is amazing! Kuddos to the author^^
While I sadly skippety skippety skipped all the steamy stuff, the non-steamy parts showcased that the author knows what they are doing. Excellent style. I would legit say that the horrifyingly striking beginning is one of the best I have read in a while. There is nothing I would change about the language, even though the genre is not my thing. I would say that the pacing and the absolute gut punch of a beginning should be enough to convince any reader.
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