Wow. Xyrine is on another level hahah. i hope this story will update again tomorrow, and daily. I really like assassin story. Thank you for the update, author.
This is quite captivating and detailed. I love it so far, so I will keep reading. Good work author.
okay so , I have read all the books from chrome and telegram , I wanted to try something different , I came to web novel and to be true it's the first book I saw here on my phone , first few chapters were awesome and felt relaxing to read , the authors's new and has this raw potential in his writing and imagination , although I haven't read many of the chapters but this can be good , hope the author continues and keeps improving .p.s:- you should retouch some early chapters , they can use some refining.
It's been quite some time since something as exciting as this appeared ...it's a good book only the translator is somehow disappointing but good to read nonetheless
It's a great book with a unique writing style, I definitely recommend others to read it
I really love the book but can you please put more chapters out there I think that this book has a future
This novel is just nice Guys just read
so this is new but I like how the direction is going
So far from what I've read, the writing style is incredibly easy to read. The details to the main character's thoughts and internal dialogues are so well organized and well-thought that he actually feels like a real person living in some kind of world. The world building and the character are designs are top notch.Here's my message to you dear author as a fellow author: you're doing incredibly great! this novel is written with love, i can just tell. don't give up and keep writing more and more :)) and for that, u get my 5 stars!
1. Amber was employed by the MC to be his secretary, but I'm guessing the many chapters of Amber not making an appearance caused chatGPT to forget about her existence since in a later chapter, his secretary is someone else?2. All that interaction and romantic tension with Amber and yet the author just kind of forgot about her. When she reappeared it felt more like "Oh damn, I forgot she existed. Better write her back in" from the author.3. The MC already met with the president and yet in a later chapter the president goes "I can finally meet the man of innovation". Either chatGPT memory is lacking or the author is going too fast to the point of forgetting their own story. it wasnt even that long ago of the MC meeting the president before this chapter.4. Almost every dialouge just feels the same. Constant usage of similar phrases and the way every dialogue ends as well is the same. Might want to experiment with dialogue to change stuff up because its hard NOT to notice dialogue feeling and sounding the same when I read them.Overall: I like the story, I just hope the Author puts more attention to detail like with Amber's existence and the MC meeting the president for the first time TWICE. Whether or not the author uses AI in their writing, I dont care, Just pay attention to your own writing and story and avoid these minor inconsistencies. They may be minor in your eyes, but they can really derail a reader from the story since they'll beq+q focusing on the thought of "Didnt he already meet the president though?". There's alot of timeskipping too, maybe thats the cause of these inconsistencies since the story is moving fast, very fast. Hope that from the chapter im currently on, I dont see anymore inconsistencies. what caused me to write this review was really because the MC's secretary wasnt Amber, who was formally employed at the end of a chapter, but a background character.
Its very interesting and good as the storyline goes on and it keeps me wanting to wait for more chapters to come in.Cant wait for the next chapter to be released !!
Seem very interesting so far, keep up the good work.