Hi! The author's review here. I just want you guys to give this series a chance first before leaving a review. I promise that this series will get better over time as I improve based on the feedbacks and reviews received.
I welcome all kinds of feedbacks and reviews that want me to improvise. I will delete hatred, insult and shaming reviews without proper context that I can take so that I can improve my writing.
You may not like the series and I will be okay with it but there are limit to what can be said or done as I am still on a journey to become a better author. But I assure you, you will fall in love with this series. Thank you.
This book is a Master peice and its sad seeing such a gem not have a higher ranking
Each chapter makes you want to read the next and becomes an addiction.
Amazing author.
The Only things that could be better is more chapters but i would rather have less chapters and higher quality.
So I've read about 150 chaps and its a good read and it scratches the legendary mechanic itch, I just wish he had more mechanic skills but he's still starting out so I get it. The one thing though is that the chapters are short, making the pace feel slow. But the author pushes out like 14 chaps a week so we eating good! All in all, I definitely recommend checking this out.
Initial review here, since the book is about 20 or so chapters old by now. Started reading roughly when the book was fairly new. Updates have gone from erratic to daily to timed now. The book itself is excellent in terms of everything you usually expect from the genre, especially writing style. Will update as things continue to progress.
Interesting plot twists. Tamiko is the pack slave, the one without a name, and who also slowly uncovers the cruel possibility that his greatest tormentor, isn't the man that bullies and ruins him daily, but the man who's been watching silently from the sidelines all these years, like a film director of the worst and most inhumane horror film ever experienced.
About the cover copyrights, I doubt Pony Canyon, TBS, Movic, Animation Do will come here to complain... unless your book suddenly shot to top 1 charts, but at that time, you probably will have commissioned your own cover. xDBy the way, as it looks like author doesn't know, this is a cover related to the anime Clannad.Now, about the book. It looks very good, and I like the premise in the synopses. Gonna check it out later.
so I'm not much of a reviewer I've maybe done 2 other reviews, I don't got much to say it's great so far the best story I have found in the cultivation genre and almost the best I've found in general. I like this one a lot more though I've decided to dedicate my power stones to this and so should you it's worth it, so much so that I doubt you can find a proper reason not to.
Ooo I love a good mage book and this one seems interesting, I want to see what else the author does with this world. the story looks promising so you should defiantly check it out
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Keep in mind that this was written when there were only 75 chapters released.I think the author is doing very well. The world is pretty unique compared to other RPG novels.-contrary to other "I reincarnated into a game" stories, you can clearly see that the world was indeed a video-game (f.e game items that are clearly made for intermediate players that want to level up their other characters faster)-dungeon system is pretty good-Protagonist buffs are somewhat balancedStory doesn't disappoint either. -Our MC doesn't start as a super weak being- that means we don't have to waste 20 minutes reading how the mc advanced from a bug to a humanoid being. MC transmigrates, and 5 minutes later he's already wounded.Characters are 5 stars-The first arrogant young master we meet doesn't wait for the MC to get 10x stronger than him, he attacks the moment he's ready.-First female protagonist, FINALLY isn't someone who falls in love with the MC the moment they meet. Based on what we've seen, she's an independent person who doesn't depend on the MC to deal with every emotional trauma she's got.World Background 5/5 for now, hope it doesn't change for the worse.
Hello author, nice work so far! I like the concept of the story and would like to see how it will progress further. Thank you for the effort and for introducing this story to us!
I only have read 4 chapters so I don'r think I have any qualifications to write a review but still whoever is interested in it can read mine. So in the first 4 chapters we have a game picking that he can't choose himself, a mc that can steal other people of their hard work basically crippling them. So far so good can both be accepted even though I don't like that he didn't choose it himself the second one is preference I don't mind it if he is a little 'evil?'. But the Problem for me is that in chapter 4 a new Funktion of monopoly was activated which is just something seemingly unavoidable which is easily avoidable and which ist just making problems and forcing him to be known by everyone and being in the limelight... Id that isn't enough When you look at the chapter title that thing gods on for another 30+ chapters or so to resolve it.