I'm disappointed in the author. He did well up until around 200 chapters, this Linzhi character was totally unnecessary. The author said he went to a different world so why are people from his past world there, it's tiring to read.
I really like the story, it's entertaining and interesting to read. There are some awkward interactions between characters, some pieces of writing that don't seem to flow with the story. There is also an enormous amount of missing words, if the story was lacking in any way I would have dropped this before chapter two just because of how many times I have to guess what word should be where. It's like you didn't even bother to proofread this at all. How can so many errors be present in such a good story? So depressing.
not bad, but i still cant really judge with just 33 chapters, i like it so far though, seems promising.SPOILER:in chapter 34 i whole use daze on the man with the crossbow and also if they are still alive after the mana flames, then Beatrice could have some fun, and also levelling up a couple of times from EXP from killing them, for example by gagging on her rod to death jejejeje.
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Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.
Your poems are beautiful dear author!!I look forward to your update everyday.. the lines are simply superb.. it's like you can feel what I feel and you put those feelings into words..You are too good.. continue writing ????
First of all, good job so far sir author. I hope you can keep up with this momentum, and i wish you all the best.Secondly, I truly enjoy rewding the story so far, the MC is quite immature sometimes which add to his character flavor. And the fact that the author inserts the MC's monologue while he maintain a calm facade conversing with others is hilarious. Anyway, initially I won't comment much about the item names but reading the title for this particular chapter is funny as heck. Good job
Honestly a great story ahead for it to be filled with collections! Your synopsis is quite good and it can pull any other readers from now! You have a rare imagination ahead author!
TLDR: liked the previous 2 this one will probably do wellA little early to give a review but I just finished reading the first two books in this series evolutionary prison and evolutionary convict and found them very enjoyable and not nearly as cliche as many other stories. I see no reason this one wouldn't live up to the hype and hope the author keeps up the good work.
Slow paced and very insular. As with all novels, great potential but development is paced. Free chapters don't do it justice so don't be afraid to use a few coins.
Why was this book not picked up again it has so many votes ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I was about to read it but a lot of people in review be like there is NTR which i don't enjoy... And i don't see the author clarifying anything so i guess there really is.. so all the 5 star i see here are from people who enjoy NTR danm people have some weird fetishes out here.