Nice novel with a very good plot. With many twists and turns along the way. A classic story where with great power comes great responsibility.
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Like it. Just need more updates. Or if you plan to stop working on it just let us know Please..........................................................
I liked this story a lot but the only problem is that it doesn’t update anymore I liked the concept and everything else about the story I just wished it updated more now I’m sad
The story setting is really fun but it's a typical novel of this type. The MC doesn't have to put in any effort to learn to create cards, just automatically being able to 'tell' the best way to make them. And, of course, recipe's come just as naturally to him as breathing. No build-up or effort means no satisfaction from the result, which means you might as well remove the crafting part of the setting and just make it action.Character's don't act like people, and they don't interact like people. Conversations are stilted and unnatural with a lot of author self-inserts that cause the conversations to jump from one point to another. The way they communicate is really hard to stomach. It gives me second-hand embarrassment. It just makes it impossible to be engaged with the story.It's unfortunate. I love crafting stories. But this isn't a crafting story. If the author reads this, this would be a good story if you made the crafting something the MC worked towards consistently over the story's timeline and you improved the way characters interact and communicate. Those are the two points that are really dragging the story down.
For those of you reading my novel, I would like to say thank you. I'm so sorry for not updating this month, I've just lost my mum and needed some time out. Updates will start again in January. Helen x
Amazing plot and story line. It drew me in immediately ❤❤❤❤
Congratulations on a new book! I've been looking forward to this since you announced it. Very excited to see what you do with this genre <3
so glad i've continued with this series, mind blowingly entertaining. a hundred thumbs up
This looks promising, but I'll wait until it's completed. I'll go back here and check after a month or so.
Ambrose hehehe..I can't wait for tomorrow's episode ...Luke beloved wife and you want to hurt her??
I loved this book. The storyline was very beautiful. To me this book was one of the best book I have readed. It not a book that kept going around in circles and dragging on and on. This book was beautiful, and still to the point. I love this read.