Right after the order, the guns in the elites' hand were pointed at the riders and muzzle flashes shined brightly.
good job author can't wait ,let the rise begin !!
Good development and please try to update on time.Nice story though. Loving the story development.Try to make the story at fast pace.........................................................................
Very intriguing! I can't wait to find out what happens next! The only disappointment was that there are only four chapters available to read at the moment.
I’ve been looking for a male lead non-harem romance for forever! And this hits the spot for me. I think you guys should give it a chance too!
there are some wrong grammar and typos, but its good the story but dont rush it i feel like the events are too fast, it has an interesting story, keep up
It's great works as astart as its the first webnovel the start of the story was normal .I hope you will continue the story as soon as possible good luck
I am more into mature or let's just say older novel contents. I passed the age of reading high school novels, but I would say, you're doing a good job author. There are some grammatical errors here and there (not obvious though, so it's fine), some spelling mistake as well, but the way the story slowly progresses, is like it. The challenges and management skills of the ML is superb. I give two and half thumbs up for you.
Its an interesting turn of events and I wish you good luck with forthcoming chapters.Waiting to read the awesome NULL..!!.I am so thrilled and excited to read such a script and the author's imagination is surely to be appreciated.
Very interesting stories,for us read ****** English use keep up hooooooooohhhhhfffffbbbbmmmmnsssssnnnnnñnnnnnnnnnnnnhhhffffddghhhhhbgtrwhjlbdzsagjjbnikoobvczawrtgffvvvvvcvvkokbvvvcxzss
Would loved a longer story.................................................................................................................................
To describe this novel I believe it would be accurate to say it's the equivalent of eating a frozen meal from the dollar store long after it has passed its expiration date. The MC has less intelligence than an ant and balls smaller than a hydrogen atom, want a little more detail on these descriptions? He hunted level 1 rabbits until he reached level 14, he didn't use his AI and failed to properly utilize his advantages by either forgetting to activate or deactivate said advantages. To top it all off while he was leveling his AI helper, instead of leveling her up as he leveled up he felt he needed to wait until he could just mass level it up to where he wants it. That's just the tip of the iceberg as well. Somehow he meets a woman who magically falls in love with him after hearing that he literally hunted rabbits for the entirety of his existence, he let his mother name his guild some completely idiotic name, and he is basically on the hit list of every powerful organization except for the strictly neutral organizations like merchants or town guards. He's essentially protected by plot armor the whole way through and the villains are so one dimensional that you can almost predict the entire story line. Considering there are other free novels which are far better than this, like there are better options for getting food than buying some television dinner from the dollar store, this novel probably isn't worth your time.