At first i didn't like it. But now, as I read and enter the storyline, I found it fascinating. I hope they'll updated news chapters soon cause I can't wait to read it.
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Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
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Great story , hard to get into but worth it , i just hope you continue it._-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-___-_-----_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_____________
kinda interesting..............................................................................................................................................
Ten thousand words written in blood, hoping for more chapters. I enjoy the story focus and the world building is really cool, hoping for more info an the world at large.
Hi author! I really like the story and it's like a MOBA games on the phone There's no grammatical errors so far and i like how you deliver your narrationSo far, so good! 5 stars for you!
A good novel... And it could be better... Hopefully you can always tries hard to improve and don't mind the harsh comment out there. You could not satisfy all people out there. Just give out your best!!
As the author of this novel, I will leave a review to summarize what is this novel about (since the synopsis doesn't tell much :")This is the story of a person who is in despair of his disability and his awaiting death, who gets the chance to enter a revolutionary VR game for a chance to get cured.But he starts with 9 other testers, as the only players within the whole game world, with different innate abilities that differentiates them from the common folk.Starting as a game native, and building up his strength in this game where getting logged out equals death**: this is my first novel here, I wish you enjoy it, power stones & feedback would be appreciated.
Bruh wheres the updates???? Been waiting for a really long while... Nice story. Capable for slow reading. Translation is fine. Quite like the charaters also.
Another half axx novel.My expectations is pretty low for any trial novel on this platform nowadays........................................