very depth writing, really interesting start ?
I love how lively Zayn is, and the friendship shared between the characters. Excalibur's sass is going to be an excellent addition to the stability of the group; I can't wait to see how the other two react to the new spear!
This story masterfully captures complex emotions, painting a vivid, relatable picture of passion, sisterhood, and personal growth. I recommended it!
Here we are back at Sarthak's novel.So... The latest few chapters have not been my cup of tea. By that, I mean that the whole "Lucifer" thing. Nonetheless, the next few chapters are a tad interesting.They expanded more on the lore and had development. Sarthak clearly likes his world building. Morgan's getting weirder, but at least Glen's there. I suggest the author add some moments of introspection. The more he writes, the somewhat better his skills become. That's all I'm gonna say for now.
Well, hello there! Though it hasn't been published just yet, I've waited until completing the first act before writing this review. Now, how should I go about this? I’ll keep it short and sweet.I loved to read. I've explored many so-called masterpieces, and naturally, I've run out of intriguing options. What's left often doesn't pique my interest.You might see the "villain" tag and think, "Another cringy book." I can't claim it won't be cringy—there are no absolutes in this world, so I don't dare say I can write a villain without some finding him edgy in some way. Yet, I am confident in my ability to express the dispositions of our leads in a way that's deserving of them.Whether you enjoy evil protagonists, antiheroes, or righteous characters—magic or cultivation, sci-fi or romance—I suggest giving this book a chance. If you find yourself troubled by something, please let me know.And if you’re a fan of harems, I apologize in advance, but please… wait!You might have already left, but if you’re still here, I hope you’ll consider giving this book a chance. Who knows? It might be the exception.I trust you'll invest some time in it and, in return, stumble upon the foreign world within these chapters. I wish you a great day and coming days. Thank you!
Very well written please keep it up author looking forward to more chapters ?
Dear Author, I'm a big admirer of your writing! After reading your book, I was blown away by your talent. I have some ideas on how to take your book to the next level and expand its readership. Would you be willing to listen to my feedback and suggestions?
he is strong compared to other players balancing that out is a problem yes but Goin the emotional route to nerf the nigg* now dat just doesn't sit well with me, I mean it's an open plot he cares they betray he snaps blah blah blah. anyway hope am wrong n will see in the future chapters. the premise of art is an explosion is way cool though bruv with all doz explosions he should av been out of mana more dan a couple of the fights but oh well semantics as they say
this is so unique. please keep writing more ?
until now its quite the relaxing read. But a bit less young master Syndrome people would be cool.
The story started off really well, but as we passed chapter 200, it began to slow down significantly. There were too many characters introduced that we didn't really care about. At some point, it felt like every chapter was just filler and the story didn't progress at all. Additionally, the main characters doesn't get any stronger beyond chapter 50. Personally, I'm dropping this because it has only gotten worse with each chapter. The story its just not moving.
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