I’m enjoying the novel a lot, I just wish there were more chapters. I would also like less annoying “women have to be abused damsels in distress” but fortunately that doesn’t really happen much in this novel
The writing of the story created without grammary or writing errors in a quite pure english has a planning and aliengned context of events the displaying of MC and sub-charachters Too, Altought the style of story developpement show that you are just an amateur Author but as noob authour is a respected work to write just continue
The 1st chapter has already caught my attention to add this book into my library, so i am really looking forward to new chapters.
wow, I have no words to explain... first the twist at the beginning got me off guard, and every chapter just keep me anticipating, like the fact that Kieran has no choice but want Ace so bad it's just??♥️♥️ I love this
I’ve been reading this for the past few days and honestly it is really good so far. The way the writing depicts emotions and thoughts is incredible. I write myself but this style is straightforward yet deep which is amazing. The whole idea so far is initial and hasn’t truly been developed, even the plot it still up in the air, but even this introduction, filled with so many different perspectives is amazing. I can feel the anger, guilt, enjoyment, and sadness within each character, they don’t give the feeling of 2D despite the lack of development, especially Urul, who is 3D and deep. The bits and pieces that are being exposed are subtle yet they don’t feel intentionally hidden, but the feeling of awaiting the secrets is still amazing. Though still early, this book seems powerful this far, hope to see more.
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interesting synopsis might be a good read
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Promising novel though there’re numerous typos. Looking forward to further updates
really not sure why this is not getting more attention. it's well written and interesting. I guess author just got bad algorithm rng or something because a book of this quality with 60 chapters would usually at least have 10 reviews by now. just want to say that book is very good so far
The comedic and cute elements in this story is an added bonus and definitely brings out the charm and sense of humor of the characters, especially Analissa! Girl definitely does not have her priorities straight.
Risking the life of the Himself and his friends, even if someone dies, he doesn't use his stat points and I don't see any logic in this. Other than that, it's a great novel