The novel is good. The sentence structure could use some fixing. Too many run on sentences and some periods or commas could help. Grammar could also use a little tweaking. Author just has to make sure that he goes over what he writes or just use grammarly.
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This entire novel is basically my life; my spirit animal made manifest. There's nothing more real than reading a story about the writers and ****posting on discord.
Hi... do you remember me? *blush* I wasn't expecting to see you again in this place... is your house nearby...may I stop by *blush* hmm, sorry.I hope Larry does not become the type of person who will risk his own life to save a stranger, regardless of whether he will be neutral or a psychopath due to what happened to him.The story is excellent and exciting, making me enjoy the plot throughout the chapter. However, the lack of a description of the world is a deficiency, in my opinion, whereas the interactions between the characters are very entertaining.
This has potential to be incredible. sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Keep up the good work choka! I love your main character personality! Plus it’s Isekai world! you better finish up this story and give us a great ending!
Author when are you going to continue with the novel. I can see that you haven’t released any more chapters since two years ago. I have just started to read the novel and it is very good, I will support you so please, can you start to release the next chapters again? The story is very good, I beg you.?
Fang lei is so cute lol?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
interesting concept, just the grammar that has a lot of problems........................................ .................. . ................
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Chapter 149..Now in space.. and... this novel went from.. Wow cool concept to.. Wow this is going to take forever..Size;- Earth/Solar System- Periphery? P-something (Can't Remember)- Kingdom- Empire (Everything here counts as nothing)- Lesser Country- Middle Country (Rules over 10,000 Lesser Countries)- Large Country (Rules over 10,000 Middle Countries)- Outer Mainland (More powerful than Large Countries, also where Ancient Gods came from in the last 13 generations)- Middle Mainland- Mainland (Where Ancient Gods Originate from)- Unknown- Unknown- UnknownPower System;- Rank Red to Purple (Earth Limit)- Tier 1 to Tier 9 / Meteorite Star to Eternal Grade (Universe Limit)- 'Unknown' but was mentioned as above Eternal Grade (Mainland)So, This book currently has around 230 chapters but could easily go over 1500 chapters..