Interesting story has been gripping me from the start, the protagonist's development, her maturing as a person, I like what the author is developing here, it's solid but not forced, I recommend.
just finished the 66th chapter i highly recommend any one read it its a lot of fun its nice to see character develop learn and grow. will say that if you are planning to read this and do read until the last chapter and you want to wait for more i only pray that you are patient.
Nice story author. love to read some of your books. are you on other platforms too? let me know if ever more updates to this it's really well-written
there are 9 reviews already so i might as well give it 10 for the title ....................................................................................
At first I quite liked it, but as other's have mentioned he's the oblivious or slow (to a crawl)-type MC typical of japanese writing, which in and of itself isn't inexcusable, but around chapter 60 I couldn't take it anymore.He starts creating underlings with his multiple minds, creates a part of 1 dude and 3 women (different bodies but all a copy of his own brain in them), and they immediately, for no reason, start having intimate group sessions while the main body has a wife (and a sister) he refuses to touch. 60 chapters of waiting for him to man up and do something on anyone, even his fiance, and within 2 paragraphs of making copies of himself they are having three ways.
one-sided perspective, racism, Chinese propaganda are the reason why this story taste bitter and it makes the readers unable to sink in the story in the sense that you feel like you're attending some kind of brainwashing orientation.
The writing might or might not be good but the translation is pure garbage. I stopped in Chapter 4 and by that time a certain cultivation technique had 4+ different names. The writing/translation also ****ed up the world building right at the start of the novel.
I'm pretty shocked. I thought this was gonna be one of those typical corny werewolf stories. But instead, it starts with a tear-jerker and gets into some humor, lore, and character building.
The author definitely put time into actually building a story.
What this novel needs is an editor. I like this type of novels and its frustrating to read a novel with broken words. The story has no problems so far till chapter 25
Its.... something. I cant say the novel is horrible, but in several instances the writing quality and ideas behind it leave a lot to be desired. Theres a lot of forced interactions and "humor" that seems like the author is trying to inject into the story, but to me at least it comes off a little forced. The author tries to make the system a mix between helpful and controlling, which ends up feeling weird because its hard to tell if its actually trying to assist the MC, just mess with his life, or force him to follow its agenda. Supposedly, some people came to this novel in promise of romance or sex scenes or whatever, but if thats the case i suggest you look elsewhere as the author skirts around those. Admittedly, im not up to the current chapters so some of these problems may have been fixed later on, but up to chapter 50 at least you'll definitely see many of these issues.
now we need this translation to start too, just like lord of the oasis, we need this too, I know for a fact this is a very very good novel, a .erg enjoyable novel, something new
This story gonna blow up soon! Love the story so far! The plot is an intresting take on an overused narrative but the author makes it work with awesome character development and world building. Give it a try!