Hello! Author here!I am thrilled to write this story, I'm just at the beginning but I already love the characters, and I'm sure you will love it too! Please it give it a try and support a new wannabe author!
The narrative simply jerks me In laughter. I like the author's use of the first person narrative. Top notch narrative really. Keep up the good work author.
It is a pity that I can not edit my review. Nonetheless, I have made a new one to state that the translation has improved quite significantly. There are now fewer errors in the latest chapters. The consistent upload of 3 chapters per day is also proof of the translator's hard work put into the story.
OMG very interesting story ❤️❤️❤️ I love the writing still and development plsssssssss keep updating ??
Hi, humble author here. I’ve given myself a 4-star rating because, as an author, there’s always room for growth. And I'm working on this story with all dedication. I’m proud of the journey and grateful for everyone who’s joined me, but I know there’s more to explore and refine. Thank you all for your feedback and support—it truly helps me improve with every chapter." I hope ya'll stay till the end and suggest and support me throughout this journey. Thanks for reading my book.
great, please don't stop this fanfiction. Please
what a great story but it only has few chapters
i only gave five starts in writing quality because i saw no problem with grammar and stuff.as for the other things i guess i liked them enough to give the rating i gave.Overall it was a great read. no problem there.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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I’ve been reading here since I got this app five years ago and never once left a review but this has massive potential and I felt compelled to say something, please do not drop this! It’s unique and I absolutely love the character and world building, with everyone dropping and not continuing with there writing I just don’t want this to be another lost story wondering what could have been! I love the naming of everything from characters to creatures and planets you have a very good start here and I can not wait to see where this goes!
A world without men. That's the premise of this story, yet for such a simple statement, it's anything but. In just a few chapters, we are encouraged to ponder, is such a world truly desirable? Can it work? Will things really change? Or will the rejected 'evil' simply take new form?I am honestly eager to find out and I must praise the author for posing such an implicit question to us readers in a smooth and cohesive way. I found every chapter to be very well written and great at pulling me in. I quickly became invested in our lead Thando and her experience thus far. I'm eager to see how the relationship between her and her friends develop. Most of all, I want to see where this journey will take her next.