lanjut up bab selanjutnya ya thor
the story is amazing
i like the book just wish i didnt had to wait for the next chapter seriously now,......
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Nah, I agree with Touch-San. As soon as I reached the same chapter, I lost most of my interest in the novel. The premise is good, but the execution takes a sharp nosedive. The setup really shouldn't have been revealed to the main character so early. Additionally, the retelling of the female game character's evil actions, which include weeks of nonstop torture through punching, limb breaking, and potion force-feeding, was poorly written. It reads like an ESL person's fanfic.
I've only read 17 chapters, but I found it very funny! I've laughed out loud several times.
That said, I'm not sure if I would still find it funny 100+ chapters in. Maybe it would have gotten old, but it's a pity it was dropped, and I won't have the opportunity to judge for myself.
Other than that, the translation was good in the early chapters, but it became a bit spotty in the last one, with the male protagonist suddenly being referred to as 'she.' Also, there were two crown princes, and one was a member of the court while the other wasn't, which was confusing.
Had to read this comment three times to make sure u weren’t threatening the author and were recommending a novel
is this guy an actual villain or it's just that mc thinks he's evil? Literally 90% of most popular "villain mc" books is just the latter
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Can't really tell because "righteous protagonist" and "evil protagonist" tags just deny themselves
What chapter are you at
does this have any type of romance, and what is the Og language of this book?
Yeah, you need to read this novel slowly. Just take it easy. This novel is awesome. A fresh experience.
Shameless novels are the best