Honest Review A very good book and obviously filled with lemons to hard everyone's "mind".
i like the story but mc forgive celes so easily he had to keep her away at least because she don't believe in him when mc near his second execution I don't like her as heroine
It's kinda interesting to see an isekai story where the MC is not OP from the start and he has a clear purpose. Nao is a likeable character (he becomes a failed hero at start is kinda funny tho)!
A future story... For now, I have no reason to drop the novel. The plot is unfolding slowly because the author loves to tell a lot of details. The action plots should be constant.
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The soul splitting ability was not utilized well. Why can't he spam it to gain skills
My father looked at me with a slanted smile and mumbled. "Hah, sucker child."
-Time to school
A self insert that gone wrong
"Your sister and her peerage can stay here. Of course we won´t teach them any powers or fighting techniques that are unknown in your reality. Nothing that could give you an advantage over your enemies and upset the balance of power. I am sure Serafall´s sister Sona will be able to come up with something to explain the absence of all of them. But as soon as they do something suspicious, they will leave. If they manage to win our trust in the time they are here, wemighttalk about it more. Is that acceptable?"
"You will take the roof too, Nona will go with you but you will take the lead when they fight their way to the roofs". Said Cassius to Max, since it would be his first real fight he can't be thrown into the streets, it would be too chaotic.