bahasa nya bagus bgt apalagi memiliki banyak ras yang keren keren parah gk bisa ngebayangin deh kalau semisalnya ada di dunia nyata/*plak/ author dgn tingkat halu ?ku masukkan ke dalam perpustakaan, oh ya sedikit saran alur sudah mantap tapi perbaiki tanda baca lagi ya kak ?
Great novel author. A fantasy story with lots of crafting. I can't wait to read more, especially as you develop the world some more. I also like his sometimes different uses of his smithy skill.
I am the author of this novel, and other authors have inspired me to review my own story by reviewing their stories. I like my novel, obviously, since I am writing it. And I am being shameless, very shameless, in writing this. Now, here is some unreliable spoilers about the story.Everything will make no sense! The world, which is Earth, will grow twenty times its normal size. (That actually doesn't sound like a bad idea.)I promise there will be lots of good food! I promise I will have at least one character eat a Tomato in honor of IEAT TOMATOES!And I will try and post 7 chapters a week!
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I'm the first review. The overall story is five stars. The plot is a bit generic with the portals and everything. I'd recommend giving it a shot.
The same cliche like, China is the most powerful, Japanese is the root of evil. Insult MC and he'll massacre everyone. etc...
Hmm. There are so many things I can relate especially with the ML's situation with his mother.Writing Quality: The narratives are all easy to read which is a plus. There are g-errors but not to the point it hinders the meaning and your reading.Story Development: There are still few chaps but the readers could already made some hints with the conflicts the ml will face in the future.Character Design: The characters are fleshed out and their appearances where describe well that we can imagine them clearly. Updating Stabilty: So far, the author has a stable update.World Background: Well written.Overall this book is quite enjoyable read.Great work author! Keep it up!
Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading
It's a good read if you're looking for something quick to read but turning off your brain is a must before delving into this.But I'm sure despite the black holes that are coming left and right, you can still have a chance on patching them up
Interesting plot and theme! A refreshing take on the story and the narration is lively and so are the expressions! Looking forward to read some more future updates to come.
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I love this book it is the best book I ever read and I can't wait for the next chapters. It is fantastic I love the characters and where the story is going. And it has a reliable upload every day. It's fantastic.