I will write spoilers."This novel overly imposes equality of strength between Jiang Chengxuan and his wife, Shen Ruyan.In the early chapters, during their cultivation in the Foundation Establishment Realm and Violet Palace Realm, it's understandable if Shen Ruyan is stronger than her husband due to her advantages from her previous life.However, after reaching the Golden Core Realm where Jiang Chengxuan condensed a level 11 golden core while Shen Ruyan only condensed a level 9 golden core, the author insists that they are equally strong, especially in the chapter where both reach the sixth stage of the Golden Core Realm. The author claims that Jiang Chengxuan can defeat a cultivator of the False Newly Born Soul Realm, and so can Shen Ruyan!Where is the logic in this?Jiang Chengxuan possesses many powerful Dharma treasures, while Shen Ruyan has only one. Additionally, Jiang Chengxuan has developed numerous and stronger divine abilities compared to Shen Ruyan.So, where does their equal strength come from?Truly, the author seems to lack understanding."
Just as the author himself already stated, his English isn't very good... Especially his awful grammar makes it hard to enjoy this novel. Having an capable editor would instantly improve my rating of this novel.
I am at chapter 69 and so far this novels seems to be a nice copy-mix of the standard transmigration/system/evolving monster/magical academy novels. You won't find much novelty here, but at least it's a solid mix of well known and liked themes. There have been some stupid cliché encounters and scenarios, but I still hope, that it won't go out of hand.
If you are bored and don't mind ignoring bad grammar, this novel is recommendable.
The storyline is so powerful and leaves you with the curiousity on what will happen next!!!?
I am looking forward for more interesting chapters❤
Good luck my dear author?
This is the book's 10th review. Had it do bcz no one was willing...?........................................................................................
sounds promising .............................................................................................................................................................................................................
There are too many grammatical mistakes you should edit them properly Initiation is already problematic making main characters she when it should be he for other things we will see how author reacts to comments and the remedies he makes
sounds interesting but why so many sign in novel??????????????????,??????????????,,,,,,,,????????,??,?,?,?,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Entretenida por el momento a si que espero y siga sorprendiéndome buena novela, espero sigas y saques mas cap , no la abandones y sigue con el buen trabajo ?☺?
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Are there no chapters this week? will there be update of chapter next week??