Wondered why disconnected wasn’t updating turns out this is the reason lol anyway this is getting a mandatory 5 stars coz of how good the first is if you disagree fight me 140
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The author has indeed created a fast paced, intense and captivating story. Each well written and described scene sparks the imagination with what it intends to portray. An undoubtedly great read.
The characters are also well done and fleshed out and the action scenes are also excellent.The kingdom building is pushed which makes the story excellent. The grammar is also well done, just a few errors here and there but they hardly affect the story. As I mention in my reviews, there are stories with horrible grammatical errors that are more popular than this hidden gem and make no mistake, this is a hidden gem.
gawd this bad the plot is bad, the translation is bad, using the word cooldown instead of channelling, (xia xi is channelling his ice nova magic) the author also like to forget what he type or is it the translators fault e.g every rank has 10 levels in the early chapter then a few chapter later the rank disappear and only level is used,( even xia he got to level 15 when he should have been upgraded in rank and start agaim at level 1)
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As of chapter 22 this story has proved to be a good read. Definitely recommended, although the source of his power is not known (mutation?) his experimentation and development of it is well thought out and well written. Minor cliches are present however they are perfectly reasonable and in fact add to the story to a truly entertaining degree. If the world is boring change it yourself!
I like these kinda stories so 5 stars without reading any of the chapter i hope you succeed in making this great ..............................
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The first couple of chapters are good, so good that you can feel that your blood boils in excitement. He is so OP and author is not limiting him some of the skills and i like that so much but after a while the attitude of the characters are not my cup of tea, a girl who is so arrogant even though he was saved by the MC thats way too much, don't you think? Ungrateful she doesn't even look cool. A MC who is so submissive to the girl eww. Rain hate on me but im not liking it. Its seems like the books standard is so high and suddenly plummeted. Honest review so dont feel offended but be motivated .
This Story is straight up amazing. Its a really creative idea and the depth of the writing really allows you to imagine for yourself. It was like watching an anime while reading a book. One thing though it doesnt seem to update as offten as everyday, but if the release dates were to be more stable then this it would get a 5 star rating from me. Go read it if you haven't now
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