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Well not much to say as the story was past face and pretty exciting, so I really liked it even though purely romance novels is not my cup of tea
I did not start reading it yet but i feel is will be a good story i wish the author will put more effort in to it and more chapters every day
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The synopsis portrays a lovely plotline.The world was built well from the start and the MC is a bit away from the norm that gives a sort of refreshing vibe to the whole book. From what I've read so far this looks to be amazing.
i read your novel three times and in the three times i reached the same conclusion that your novel can be very much better i think your novel with the good foundation in the start may reach near thousand
honest review, I don't really like much novel that use first person POV like I, I , I it's literally like a diary not a novel. The story so far is so straight without depth explaination about everything. (it also can help you words count higher) , basically everything is cliche in this novel , MC doesn't really thinks and act like normal human being with insecurities and empathy, maybe for him this is just artificial world . what would you feel after being throw out to unknown world? be low key and gain information? not with MC , deep relationship with female? just collect them like pokemon Go by throwing some berries at them.
this book is actually really good the main character is not a human but a boss this type of book is rare and there is no system the only downsides are 1. u stopped posting2. maybe you could use -50 hp or [fireball] else the reader cant understans the fight and sorry for my bad grammar
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Love it, i love non human reincarnation. Can’t wait for more chapters to be posted. Keep up the good work, and keep the updates coming. ????????????????????
Well as proofreader and editor least to say I´m pro novel xDBut as reader myself I think the story has grat potential, it´s the authors first novel so well things always start from somewhere and I think with time will only get better. As for now well MC is still a child, and as we all now which child hasn´t thrown a tantrum or behaves like a little shithead ^^I love the way the MC is and I can´t w8 how he will develop growing up .....like maybe fall in love, making friends, loosing familymember, remember past, getting knowled about his real human parents , etc.....so let´s ride the bus and hope for a good journey :D! Author-san keep up the creative work, don´t go dying on me because of exhaustion :P
In the beginning, you might be a little confused because it starts off with cases etc.I'm a little confused because to me, it seem the genre takes in modern times but it says that the genre of this novel is Eastern Fantasy...So is it that I need to read the whole thing or...?
This is an unpolished gem with intricate character and world design. Although some will find it hard to follow due to technical detail, I personally fell that the writer has put her love to it and strive for a better writing. Can’t wait for update please support this writing!
