Sucks that he has dropped this since he has not p[posted a single chapter in 8 months. I was really enjoying where everything was going, except for the really small chapter size. Towards the later chapters, it started to remind me of a novel that did not get picked for translations that was about someone being the Admin of a rich people chat group. He would invite rich people into the chat group and they would be able to buy amazing cultivation items for real-life cash. And the MC would be the benefactor of the money.But in this one, he invites a few people into a part of a system. It's really only the cash shop of the system. And that would allow them to buy items for real-life money. The world also started to change into a cultivation world and more random people were about to get a shop system.Basically, the world was becoming pay to win. And I was looking forward to more. Sadly I was disappointed in the end. This would be a 4.5-star novel if it was not dropped.
Really good chapter one, haven't seen any mistake. Good grammar and unique permise
man good to know you are back. .. it has been a month with no upload. also it's good that I can now give powerstones. I support u so don't worry and write chapters daily. ???
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As of chapter 14, it is decent. Since there is not that many chapters yet it is hard to give a proper review but it certainly has potential.
Interesting plot that this story has. Sure not gonna regret to come by, or even keep going to the end. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is the most ridiculous story I have ever read. Not a single silver lining whatsoever.
the writing quality is just very irritating I'm pretty sure this is not someone's first language, which is very clear. the story is,, I don't know really a 50-50 depending on if you like it or hate it me,, I didn't think it was that bad but I definitely didn't like it.
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honestly not worth the read at all. the story is very basic and not well written. there is constant mistakes were it will say one thing and then immediately change it too another
Hey AMWalker any updates ? are you ok?
please dont drop i quite liked it
please come back an finish what you begun.
hope u are ok
and not fallen ill