Hi author Anna i love❤️❤️❤️ reading all your novels and I'm very happy to read dis one too??? keep on updating plsssss and write other book like dragons elves
Amazing, electrifying story from start to finish! The pacing is well crafted and the writing style and the quality is insane! The author description is so vivid! Feel like the whole cinema when reading there. 100% recommend for this peak!
It's an interesting story ,and Maxwell is such a relatable character to follow. The story is easily digestible but the large paragraphs makes it look congested. All in all a solid story
This is a xianxia inspired novel taking elements from modern day system rpg elements. Very promising start and the grammar is good, I hope the quality remains the same
The whole story unfolds according to its title and the plot and characters have no deficiencies, it includes the human essence in this story which makes the journey while we read, become more realistic and deceive you.The best thing is that the protagonist is a character who is shown as someone with a sharp mind and that even if he seeks benefits, he will not blindly pursue them and will know where to stop to obtain improvements.Benefits
I thought this would be another bad story, but i actually really like this one. The story it self was on a whole another level of writing, so i recommend it to everyone
It’s ok ok..
Okay author-sama. So I feel like you have a solid idea for a story. However you messed up on world building way to quickly and try to make up for it later. You also need to fix your system of using (him, her, I, our, them, they) if you wish for a better story you need to stay away for using (I). It makes your story unreadable. Got to chapter 40. I hope you can review what you written and maybe make a rewrite so the story flows better because I believe you have a solid plot that can make a good story. Hope my review helps in anyway.
As of ch 49 I am throughly enjoying the novel. It’s hard to find a good kingdom building novel but this one scratches that itch. Atlas, the Mc is kind, tenacious and reliable. I’ve enjoyed watching his character progress from observing fights to actively training in harsh environments and fighting above his level. While I am a bit disappointed that he uses a spear, I do hope he’ll use some magic in the future.Galanteo does a great job bringing all the characters to life. The teams’s reactions to Mira have me crying laughing ??. I know the author has fun writing those scenes. My favorite characters are Mira and poor Milo. Hopefully he integrates with the rest soon ??.I’m only just starting so I can’t say anything about update stability, but if we base it off of legendary broken player, we shouldn’t have anything to worry about. There are slight hints of romance, probably a sisterhood in the future. (Do it ?) The fight scenes are just long enough to be satisfying but not too long that I have to skip chapters. All in all, if you enjoy kingdom building, fantasy, romance and comedy, you should check this novel out. As always, great job author ???
Hello everyone. Its me Valerian07. First of all, I would like to thanked all readers who read my novel and thank you for the power stones. And for your comments and reviews, I really appreciate that. Of course, I gave myself a credit for being a writer despite having other jobs haha. And the ideas you all gave me. Its a lit, not gonna lie.
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