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It started out to be a story with good potential. The MC is going through the "weak to strong" route and there were lots of fights worth reading. The translation is okay as well.However, the issue lies with the story itself, by how it was written by the author. By the time it hit the arc where he was teleported elsewhere (not sure, about Ch200+ maybe (Volume 5) I realized that the wash, rinse, repeat in this story is so heavy and the "praise be the MC" reaction chapters so sickening that the plot had hardly advanced. Everything is about the crowd's reaction and disgust-turned-shame-and-respect. The side characters have flat personalities. There's a limit to how much an author can milk a story to stretch out the word count, and me? I've long reached my limit with this story. Sorry to say this, but after reaching till here, I felt like reading this story made me dumber. There's no advancement in the writing style even after so many chapters. My head is literally aching right now.I gave the story several chances to redeem itself. But sadly, I can no longer tolerate it. I have to drop this novel, not because of the translation quality but because of the author's writing itself. Ah, such regret because I do think that the mystery of the Painting is interesting and I'm leaving it when it's still unsolved.
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Very unlikeable face-slapping story with generic lecherous MC. There’s a ton of chapters that are completely filler. If you like this type of novel it’s better you do something that is better in life.
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The stories progressing slower than I thought but I think it fits with, you know being a monk and all.But the thing that's bothering me is when the Yandere aspect comes in as it's the only tag that made me interested in this but still it's a solid story for now with slow pacing.On top of the slow pacing there is your upload schedule which is pretty spontaneous Pls make a good schedule and put it in the synopsis.The story also seems more on the lighthearted side and I'm just waiting for it to progress further so I'm just gonna stack the chaps for now.
So it's a story of particle physicist - a person who study interaction of particles, look like a scientist to me, wonders whether this will a cultivation story where a person uses scientific knowledge to solve his problems, since it's about particle it may be about Qi or its composition or whatever it is, though I think I will give this story a try since it is given in notes that the MC will a cunning person and I'm really looking forward.... **: Rating will change depending on the novel...
this needs a tag for too many side character chapters and for somehow no one of them adding something good. at chapter 50 all his close ones are useless dumb people who have no ambition but I guess they will change and 100 chapters down the line someone will say it was for Character progression.
Okay so let me just say this about Wei Guangming — the man is a MASTER of performance. The author literally writes that he ran all the way from the Lu Family's bicycles, drenched in sweat, and Lu Qingqing's internal monologue is just 'Even a trash bag wasn't as good at pretending as he was.' I literally laughed out loud. That line is so good. But the real plot brilliance here is how Lu Qingqing uses his own expectations against him. In her past life, she was naive and believed his act. This time, she plays the grieving, weeping girl to perfection — sobbing all the way back to the courtyard, letting him think he still has her under control. Meanwhile, she's already secured the severance documents, communicated with her grandfather, and set up her counter-strategy. The scene where Huang Ergou is outside fuming because she didn't ask about the hidden treasure? Chef's kiss. She deliberately denied them what they wanted while making them think they won. The plot structure here is tight — every chapter builds tension, and the author never lets the reader forget that Lu Qingqing is playing a dangerous game on two fronts: the Red Committee outside and Wei Guangming's deception. The pacing is relentless. I couldn't stop reading.
I loved this book!! It was a great storyline and the characters were well thought out. I couldn’t put it down. Easy to follow and descriptive! I’m excited to get into book 2: Konstantin ...
waiting for more tiwists
