The names are too hard to remember
To put it simply, this novel has flaws as vast as Jupiter. I concur with most readers that after Volume 1, the quality takes a nosedive. The criticisms mentioned by others, though some might be biased, address common issues they've pointed out (like a lack of consistent development). It's true that the author was pioneering the overpowered protagonist genre during its early days, which influenced the trend. While I appreciate the originality of his first volume, I believe his pre-planned ideas depleted after that, leading to reliance on clichés to fill the narrative gaps.
Now, let me address the readers on Novel Updates. I commend your discerning nature; those who visit this platform are highly knowledgeable and can spot the flaws effortlessly, often having honed their skills through anime and manga. However, I remember my own journey as a beginner, where I enjoyed some "so bad, it's good" shows despite feeling unsure. As I gained more experience, I realized those shows were indeed poor. Similarly, for you at Novel Updates, the majority of you have a keen eye for inconsistencies and contradictions. It's a pleasure to have such a community of experts.
To the minority who might be new to the site, I urge you to examine the flaws pointed out here against the novel. Trust me, the problems are significant and might not be apparent while reading. And don't mistake OP elements as the sole reason for the novel's shortcomings; rather, it's the lack of competence from the author that makes it stand out negatively. Remember, "bad" writing isn't solely due to overpowered characters; it's the author's inability to craft a well-rounded story that counts. So, when evaluating, always trace the root cause, and you'll find the real culprit: incompetent storytelling.
Without a doubt, this is my all-time favorite novel. I find myself tearing up throughout each storyline. Here are the highlights:
Pros:
1. The male lead is incredibly yandere, which adds an intriguing dynamic.
2. The emotional depth is impressive; it effortlessly tugs at my heartstrings.
3. The female lead is smart and well-developed, making for an engaging protagonist.
4. The system's progression is both humorous and cute, adding an enjoyable element to the story.
Cons:
1. Unfortunately, the author seems to be on a break or has discontinued the series, leaving me in daily anticipation for updates. *sighs*
2. Some chapters include sensitive content like non-consensual situations and imprisonment; be sure to check the tags to ensure it aligns with your preferences.
3. Despite these concerns, the book is otherwise exceptional!
Overall, it's a fantastic read despite the temporary pause.
I have quite low standards when it comes to storytelling – as long as it's not overly cringe and written in a lighthearted manner, I'm usually content. Surprisingly, this story exceeded my expectations! The main character isn't your typical dense guy; he initially tries to distance himself from the girl to preserve his idealized view of Yuri, but in a hilarious way, his efforts fail. The heroine is also well-developed, making for an intriguing dynamic. What sets this novel apart is its unique concept of a male protagonist in a yuri story, which I haven't seen executed successfully often. The author has done a fantastic job, though. I'd rate it a solid 7.4. I'm giving it five stars because I believe people often don't give this novel a fair chance before judging. I encourage others to read more chapters before deciding, rather than dropping it after a few.
Could someone explain the ranks I know there’s common - rare - epic - unique - legend. That’s it
+ The simulator was quite interesting
+ MC was rational and overall didn't come across as dumb or annoying
- Translation was very subpar, sometimes it was even not translated
- The narrator just keeps d*ck riding the MC
- From chapter 300 it just feels like the author has given up, way too many new “energies” when it was unnecessary
Dropped at around chapter 370
6/10
Would only recommend if the world hopping really interests you.
thanks you so much for replying . I'll re read it from first ?
i don't read chinese novels but hell yeah.
Idk how either ? I've been wondering too, maybe because this comment was posted before they add the rule ┐(‘～`;)┌? idk I don't really remember it
My mind be voice acting the characters and the music is cherry on top AM I TOO FAR GONE
It's a really good book. If you don't try it, you're missing out. The story evolves over time. If you're going to set one challenge for yourself this year, this should be it. I swear other books have copied parts of this book, it's that good of a story. Try a few chapters. What would it harm? "Do it. Do it. Do it." Lucy- Disenchantment
Wtf is this, almost 6k chapters. How much time would it take me, 1 whole month even if I have to binge
The f*ck can it be so long