I quite like where this story is going. I think it can do better in various aspects, like descriptions or details, but I can't say much since I myself wouldn't know how to do better. As for free ideas, only comes to me adding some friendly animal characters; I believe you already set the base for it.I'll follow your work closely, as long as I can. good job!
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I've read every chapters and I can say that the characters can all be described with a single sentence:- Ji Li - Stupid big-breasted Loli that lust for MC's beauty- Cat Southnorth - Arrogant Cat Demon Loli- 2nd Senior Sister - Cold, stuttering and skinny.MC always has the same interaction with them, he thinks of Ji Li as a 'stinking little sister that craves for his body' and 'someone who sold her brains to the heaven for breasts', he wants to fatten the second senior sister because she's too skinny.Also, although this story has the same premise as 'The legendary Mechanic' and 'I am a legendary boss', this time, MC is transported to a xianxia game where he actually consider himself as a living of this world unlike in TLM where MC just think of NPC as NPC. The game elements aren't always present and this feels a bit more like a weird Xianxia.He also at first seems like a Sword Cultivator but he can't for weird reasons that should be explained with further chapters.
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A very promising book that unfortunately suffered from a lack of care from the author : update stability so far under the ground that it touched Earth core … Consider yourself lucky if you got 1 chapter a month.Conclusion : not worth it until Author can keep a regular schedule
Old reader don't bother with it..New reader try this..This novel have about 70 percentage common thing...so you only love it if you are new reader ..not like me who read over 100 cultivate novel
I'm surprised by how meaningful this novel is, it changed my life. I showed this to my family and it changed their lives, too. They continued to show this novel to neighbours and their lives changed,too. Now we all worship Lin Fan, the god of cringe.
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It is good, better than alot of other fanfics I have started reading. So yes, I would recommend giving it a try before deciding.Keep up the good work author!
Great story. what happened to chapter 116? it says chapter 102? it's a repeat...Author please fix.
wonderful book! kudos b!
This story is layered with symbolism that I can't stop thinking about. The dress itself represents more than just clothing—it's dignity, it's survival, it's the difference between eating vegetables and plain porridge. When Yang Muqing tries to buy it, she's not just trying to own a garment—she's trying to own Su Jinle's success, her independence. And the thirty yuan thrown on the ground? That's not just money, that's power displayed. Yang Muqing literally steps on Su Jinle's dignity along with that cash. But here's what really got me: the performance bonus deduction. Twenty yuan. That's the same amount Su Jinle earned selling the dress. The author is showing us how the system works—the poor can barely earn anything, but the powerful can take it away with a phone call. "Someone high and mighty could bend a person's spine with just a single word." That's the theme right there. Power imbalance. And Su Jinle's realization that her pride cost her family money? That's the painful coming-of-age moment. She's learning that in this world, being right isn't enough—you need power too. The hair ribbon she gives Auntie Egg Seller? Small gesture, but it shows she still believes in kindness despite everything. That's the symbol of her unchanged heart.