I really wanted to like this story. It does some things quite well, and at first it seemed like a really fresh experience, but after a while it began to seem like a one-trick pony. Basically it relies way, way too heavily on gimmicks. These gimmicks are what made the story interesting in the beginning, but the author seemed to lack the ability to properly incorporate them into a real story, and instead just made /everything/ about this gimmick, to the point that it becomes a crutch that eventually drags the story down.It tries very hard to be funny, and it does succeed at times, but mostly just hammers home the same juvenile, unfunny jokes until they become a serious annoyance.A good author would have taken that concept that worked in the beginning and subtly integrated it into a "proper" story, rather than relied on the gimmick to carry them through and overuse it again and again and never actually get to writing anything worth reading about.
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Great Work! Overall Writing is good with no grammatical mistakes and smooth English sentences which are easy to understand, The plot is interesting and well written without any chaotic dialect which made this novel even more extraordinary so keep it up brother!
Very rough a lot of the problems can be easily solved though with a simple edit by someone even slightly proficient in english The main character is incredibly edgy but expresses it immaturerly and incredibly often, as if he has 8th Grade Syndrome. His trigger word is death if you say that, or it even flits across his unstable little mind be prepared for a full on ****storm. The largest flaws with the novel, in my opinion is the characters very exaggerated descriptions of himself and his the constant references to his past life, it doesn't really move on from that so your often pulled back to something that does not help build character depth
I just check this out, out of now where yesterday. cause we didn't have net and I only just have an access for about 30min. I randomly selected this series and I DL it. I didn't expected that I will binged read this throughout the entire night!Author I didn't sleep through the night!!Ah! I'm waiting for the chapter update!!
I like books about farming.But I also like MC's that are smart and thoughtful and hard-working. All of that is true in this book, even though sometimes there's not as much farming as I would like. Definitely not an overpowered MC and so many tense adventures await.