NoLa2

Good, I would recommend it!                                                                                                                              

Well, I read the original fanfiction, and I must say that the difference is noticeable, good work by the author....................................

Writing quality is great, I don't have to reform the sentences in my head.*****Updates are prety good(not the "5 updates per 3 days now wait month" style). ****Story seems to come along nicely, not breaking apart every 3 chapters like other novels. *****Characters feel alive, realistic. *****Book too small to judge background yet, so **** until expansion.Overall, it's a good read. 4.6 rounds up to 5btw is this the correct way to do spoilers?

A breath of fresh air - good characters, interesting (and different) magic, and a very interesting world. Translation quality is solid and updates are reliable - what more can you want?

It's a good book but It doesn't have many chapters yet so I cant really talk about update stability or world/character development but I will say its a good story that reminds me of The Snake Report and Tales of the World Devouring Serpent the only issue is the grammar which the author is getting better at after each chapter so overall its a read.

I really like this novel, but i've got the impression that the hero is far too immature. The reaction he has with a few kids is puerile, it make me a bit sad if we take account that he is 30's.

Genuinely love the story not alot of pokemon stories thats not about fighting hope it nvr drops ############################################################################################################

Normally I would nitpick any story for the best of the author. Yet I’m really unsure about what to say. I enjoy the torture of the Mc that is certainly is starting to accept what he is at some point and I would not wonder if he or she might get the best out of both worlds . I also enjoy that the Mc is not your run down the mill op character beings victim of his lust but rather the victim of the affection by others also thanks to its god given talents . I enjoy that the story got its naughty side but keeps grown up about it. In my opinion it’s one of the few good original works the only thing negative would be the update stability.-..but hey the author us doing this out of his own will spending his time writing for our enjoyment.5 out of 5 for this onePs: Well the only thing that might need some attention is some extra world building but I honestly don’t care because the character development is balancing this out.

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billions of transistors mmmm okay IBM mmm okay 40T memory impressive but not that wow in 2022 anyway this looks just too unique let's see hhh

Incomplete novel.... i drop it at chapter 3 ...has potetial but very rush and childish and *****...yeah *****...where did he got the money after their parents died?  and base on ur description u dont have any knowledge bout boxing or Martial Arts....this is not a novel but only a story, a wattpad story...wc is 4 beginers....

It is pretty good,not that bad at all. Just wish you would update more. Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice! Nice!