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I was just going to read only chapter one but then I git hooked and am still reading, keep it up author
Honestly speaking I am quite an optimistic person and not someone who uses practical logics all the time so at first I thought that I'll just give this a shot and then drop but~!-See where it lead me!Anyways it is a real fun novel for those who see the world more practically than others and as well as for those who are like me!not that 'realistic'. Both kinds of people can give this a try. Trust me just give this 'a try' ! and the rest is history!
I hope you give it a try to this. If your looking for a apocalyptic fantasy with out cliches, then you luck out finding this Novel! Literally you could find a winning lottery ticket in the floor right now before finding a better apocalyptic story than this. Personally, I'm kind of tired from isekais with lazy writing just putting every stuff every other story has already used, but this? takes it to another Level; With not just the protagonist being really alive, taking dacisions that you love and some that even if you don't like but totally understand why the mc would do think or do that! The writing of the story is god-like making all the scenarios and characters really vivid and easy to remember, and don't even think of the explication of how the world got in such a mess! So Epic! if you have read to this point, and still not sure to read it, i just sincerely hope you give this Novel a try. It will not take you even 4 chapters to love this story from top to bottom like it did to me.
A very interestIng story with nice and funny characters.While there are some errors with the translation, its ignorable.I really enjoy the story and crave for more
Okay I'll admit. This is actually really nice. The grammar is good enough to flow with and the premise is quite good. Give this a go, you might like it.
I'm one of those "silent or ghost readers" I don't comment or review much. I just wanted to tell the author that please improve your writing quality
Hello, Author here. I decided to write this novel because of my love for alchemy in cultivation novels. while there will be every cultivation-related plot point going on in the series, it will mostly focus on Alchemy.I tried to make the MC clueless about cultivation at first, and that came off as being dumb initially. however, that changes within the first 10 chapters. Please do give it a read, especially if you like Alchemy as I do.
If you are in a Gunfight what will you use a gun or fist? @#$% System already told MC that his opponent is stronger but the stupid MC still use fist. R.I.P. common sense
Story is way too rushed.It has potential but it is ruined by the fast pacing. Everything is happening neck to neck with no break in between. As such, there are many plot holes left.
This is one of those feel-good kinds of stories, and indeed it feels good for the fun of it. A character centred around destruction is pretty entertaining to visualise, after all. The writing in and of itself is good, as there is not much to criticize in terms of grammar and spelling, but alas the earlier chapters have a few pacing mishaps. The storytelling works for those who like simple OP characters who fit their titles of grandeur.
hi there, is this dropped or just in hiatus?why does it feel to me that if he's a Filipino(well Phil-Am) that his character is just suitable if he a laking probinsia or experienced life in province, I don't know about city grown people though.also the world building is good though chaotic.plot armor is present but becomes suble if you don't nit pick on it too much.personality is good.though some people might not have this as their cup of tea, it is still a good read. hope that the author continue this.
my big gripe with the story is that it feels like a series of notes, or like you're watching a movie and it's just characters standing in a room while the narrator tells you what *would* be happening if it was a movie. there's a big rule of "show don't tell" in fiction and it's usually to avoid situations like this, it feels very "heavy" on the mind to just read chapter after chapter of expository paragraphs about a bunch of background information especially when it doesn't mean anything to us yet. we were introduced to a family of dragons, their names, histories, size, powers, relationship dynamics etc then they just got thrown away because "no this new guy is the mc". we got introduced to a void in space with these realm trees, spread out across the sky and glowing, a big empty space as the location for the novel, then it got deleted because "no actually were going over here to this heaven place instead". then we had to go through the whole process of exposition dumps for the people who mattered again, it feels like a burger wrapped in 4 layers of packaging, inside a sealed bag, placed in a locked chest, hidden in a wardrobe. even if it's our favourite thing ever the price is too high. you have to study and study chapters and chapters of homework just to get into this novel and I genuinely had to put my tablet down a few times to give myself time to relax from it all.
