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The main character goes from intelligent and pragmatic to merciful and naive within about 30 chapters, on the level of a Japanese MC at that. "Oh, you just tried to kill me? That's fine, you can leave." At first, the MC killed threats without hesitation, yet later, he risks his identity being discovered (which would instantly get him hunted by those far more powerful) to kindly ask a group "please don't hunt wisps anymore". The foolish main character combined with the trope-filled writing killed the story for me, and likely will for anyone more fond of calculative/antihero MCs.
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I can't stop grinning when I'm reading this novel. It was captivating from the start and only gets better. It's been added to my daily reading list for a week now and hasn't disappointed.
Even tho this isn't about the story but I have a joke for you guys...What do u call a bird that have been stoned?A stoned bird ;-;
The novel is pretty decent but its not for me, mc gets cucked and tbh hes looking more like a side character to me. *sigh* i dont really know where this is going but im not really interested in reading furthur. Im not saying this is a bad novel by all means i think this has potential but this isnt for me.
There are quite a few problems with the translation. Why's the translator going with first name last name approach? Dai Li should be Li Dai. And please put some notes in places where Pinyin are used. The translator uses lao, which I assume is short for laoshi. I thought it was the guy's surname at first. There are also sentence formation errors, etc. after a few chapters.As for the story, since this is the first sports genre webnovel here, it's quite interesting & feels fresh to read.
At first it was the storyline seems best of best but following later chapters you can see plot is stretched beyond to the point it hurt our poor mind and soul. Author seems confused to which area he had to develop plot (though written greatly). Most of time I feel author forget about main plot when branched to subplot. There is a cliff hanger (share issue on his company and system) and then branches to another storyline (going to military war) about 100-200 chapter and still didn't close the previous cliff hanger.
Writing Quality is standard, which sadly most novels fail to reach, with minor mistakes that the author seems to eventually fix/will eventually fix.Can't complain about the stability of updates, with chapters coming out quick and consistently.The story is developing well, it's not as slow as I was dreading but it's not fast either. Good pacing.Character Design is alright, minor issue of the character feeling shallow although I can't precisely pinpoint why that is. Perhaps it's because there is not much history known about the character and he doesn't seem wise so far however the novel is still new, got far to go and development could end up being able to compete with the best of them.World Background is mediocre at best, we so far know there are 2 worlds, 2 villages, 2 cities, a random kingdom the MC isn't in, 2 towns and a forest. We know very little about all of it by chapter 119 but as before the novel is still at the start of everything, it can improve.Sorry for the crude review, not experienced in them, just thought I'd give an honest opinion rather than "5 stars great novel".
What an interesting book! Need more chapters!!
enjoyed it... looking forward for more