ViadhivanRanata
Tf Humans are still evolving. We never stopped evolving. We are still adapting to different kinds of environment.
Ok, I readed until ch. 100.I will not say that the novel is bad, if you want something to read without thinking that much about the history/plot, it's ok.In general it follows:Someone is ill - someone recommend the MC - go to MC - MC read the case and make an elixir.Repeat it forever and here is the novel.
Translator of chapt. 387-388 is messing around he keep adding additional name and replacing other names of people like what the hell.
I just realised that it seems the author really have trouble with math but so what? I'm here to read stories not study math HA⬆HA↗HA↘HA⬇
Props to this story for making me laugh! The humor is well-written, and I really enjoyed that aspect of this story. It's well-written, with little grammar issues that stood out to me (punctuation, periods missing). It has a unique charm to it that other's in its genre does not have. Worth your time to check it out!
Enigma Red Dungeon is the WORST arc I have ever read. This arc had to be the worst structured one, with So many POV switches with 30-40 characters put on focus simultaneously, every chapter with no link to each other.
we are going from someone's tragic death, to someone wishing to create harem, to past life flashbacks, to sudden slice of life, MC doing the annoying hiding identity thing etc, so many things happening all at once.
Most annoying thing that kept on happening was we are going through someone's POV story but then cut to another person in the middle of that story, by the time the novel picks up on the previous story point the reader either forgets or stops caring all together.
Author please never cook an arc like this ever again.
Overall the first 40 chapters were great and I was prepared to dig in and get invested but then I turn to chapter 41 and the quality (translation) immediately took a step of a cliff and plummeted before preceding to blow up into a flaming pile of $#$& aaaaaa I hate it it was so good is there anywhere that translates it properly I’m actualy thinking of paying.
I'm new to these kind of Stories and this was the perfect start for me. A Well-written and engaging story with a good plot that hook you inKeep writing my friend.
Writing at the start is rough , really rough. Stuck through it as there are edits here and there that hint at better writing to come. What killed it for me though was the character progression. Just jumps all over thr place and really killed the enjoyment for me. I really wanted to like this book as the premise seems great but the execution really doesn’t make this worth reading. And certainly not worth using stones on.
Shameless author review... Although it's my first book, I will say I am enjoying it, with all the twist and turns in my head, all you need to do is sit back and relax, as we go on an amazing journey together[img=recommend]
Story is causing me to lose brain cells.So he wants to show his AI to the world insgead he shows design drawings. is he showing them the coding? I don’t he is as that would be dumb and would take hours for the worlds best programer just to skim through the general outline of the program.World background 1 star as has magor lopholes.Story developments, 1 star as MC shows up in conference empty handed with just plans for some theoritical AI design (he doesnt even have an actual AI) and everyone is acting all shocked and awed by his pie in the sky.
The Synopsis was good i hope the story will to, i can't Wait to read the story. ????????????????????????????????
