Dantes_inferno
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It’s a good novel , only problems I’ve seen besides NOT ENOUGH CHAPTERS is a steady update time for chapters of course bad grammar / wrong words used but honestly a good novel! Good luck author and I hope you stick to the book if possible tell us the readers your update schedule or if you can’t just say I don’t have a definite time to update thanks!Ps: I love potatoes and potatoes love me....??
honestly I have to drop, the mc is just an extremely naive and frustrating character he genuinely made me feel like ripping my hair out
Only on chapter six and already hooked. It has a cool concept where he intertwines with the game instead of the game intertwines with him. The MC is also displayed perfectly naive and unaware. He is a fellow who despite has most bad things happen to him, still cares for other people.World background is amassing. It know what it wants to be and it is. It is a true world that could even be realFor story, well there is only six chapter of now, so....And to anyone who says it is bad
Overall interesting story line, the characters are well described, and the world background is put together in an interesting way.The updates seem to be rolling in, which is great!The only thing I noticed is that there are a few issues with grammar, the one that stood out is subject verb agreement. There are cases when the subject is singular and the verb is plural. This is pretty small though, and doesn't cause interruptions in the reading experience.
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i had high expectations honestly. i always liked op mc with a very big advantage, always loved it, but why did it had to start with conflicts one and another, and basically every woman here accompanies trouble. I wish it started different, but now its just conflict left and right, to resolve one conflict, he creates another conflict *facepalm*. With all these advantages, imagine if it started differently, he could've accumulated big slaps instead of small slaps.
A very intriguing story. This was such a fun read And I can't wait for more. I can rest assured about the quality of translations since this is being edited by Lunaelle. Also this is the first book I have ever spent my Coins on!
Any one who likes reincarnation to a game world novel then this is a great pick. I wanted to stop reading this around chapter 25 and then again at 36 as I just couldn't keep focus, dreading the wall of text that would give me information/answers to questions that were never asked, only to find our that if they didn't do this you would of been super confused, but by chapter 52 you start seeing things fall into place and starting to make a lot more sense.. then bam you at the end of whats been translated feeling like "FAAARRRRRRKKK I WAS FINALLY ENJOYING THAT" The side character development is pretty bad, but this can be seen as the author trying to make people follow the mind set of the MC, he just doesn't have time to worry about side characters at this point in the novel, so i don't see this as bad point,k if it stays like this though at later chapters then its gonna be an issue. I am giving this 5 on everything because i can see potential in the novel and want to see further updates, if or when this novel start releasing more chapters I will re visit this review to update.
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