This book reminds me of the old cultivation novels... It's nice.There aren't many bad points in the novel. The grammar and punctuation are both decent. Proper spacing and sentence structuring. My only issue with it is that it feels a bit rushed. The chapter lengths are good in my own opinion but it just feels a bit rushed. Dialogue isn't a lot, and feel stiff as well...Altogether it is very good, but would be even better if these issues addressed...
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I'm all for generic cliched novels. I mean, what else are you looking for on here. But this novel is so bad that it'll make you cringe. I was interested since the premise seemed solid, it had potential. However, it becomes rather apparent that the writer is not capable of living up to expectations. Which sucks because I was really looking forward to this one.
Great book love it. Can’t wait for mc to do his duty and repopulate the world lol he probably can only give birth the females but of course great. Only wish you don’t drop this and continue to write with passion it can really become in the top 50 and above if you keep going.
This story has fresh Scenario but the rare some CLiches hear and ther and our mc is a bit op but the slowly Growing To OP Type he is Not Instantly op like most MC .. and the story Gives out a cultivation/slice of life of 2 Siblings Kinda felling IN the curent chapters and develops The world quite nicely 2,
so give it a Try it might be for you if you like Growing to op Type Cultivation Novels whit a mix of Slice of life kinda feeling
What can I say this is getting a 5 stars from me as it is my favourite type of genre and has a lot of my favourite aspects to read in a novel, you have me hooked to see where this novel leads I will be here for the long run keep them coming Amanasci
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Amazing story. Love the tranmigration female lead theme. Especially main character fluffy romance. But why must they gain their memory it givesbaeayvall the mystery oh well love the different pov anyway.
Amazing !!!! We all have read stories about the MC having a system by have you read one where the MC is the system? I THINK NOT!!! This is an amazing story filled with humor and a sense of satisfaction that you can only get from a great novel. So READ THIS AMAZING NOVEL!!!
that the synopsis does not deceive you, the novel starts great, and develops quite well, the beginning was at least curious, but original xd, and the lemon is quite good
i loved the story's direction, it one of the best fc ever i read. Please more quick update and maybe you can share your current picture of the characters.? Thanks for a good story.