Solid 5 for now. I didn't see any big negative in this novel. This is my form of support to author, will revisit is again when story has been fleshed out to review again. For now, this one is a well written novel with good characters and fantasy world.
Its a good novel thats flowing & has an interesting cast... Its rare to see the cast of a harem who are unique & have things they want to do instead of always being the YESMAN to their counterpart... The only part that makes it lose a point in story development is because it doesn't make sense since he wants revenge against the hunter for using them as bait... Why hasn't he hired a lawyer or something to sue his mother for their inheritance since he has the money & back-up to do that now... That makes it flawed since if you want revenge you always start at the bottom... Hope we see a resolution of that part... I hope its not one of those forgiveness arcs since it looks like the mother never cared for them...
Good story is worth it of your time and the pace of story is good too! I think the problem here the story development, base of the current story development more likely the incoming plot of story only revolves on girls.I'm hoping that I'm wrong!
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I like how the characters are introduced ch 1 and the bonds between them. I also found the Kobe part funny- the writing is good and fleshed out well. The part with the nightmare (ch 3 I think) was rlly good with how the emotions were laid out and the monster
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I like fighting scenes and how the story steadily progresse. The overpowered main character is a plus too.I also like the fact that its not a generic harem. One heroine is more than enough.
Well it's been 9 months and I hope that the author decides to continue this work... I thought chapters 3,4,5 were straight up hardcover publisher quality quality... Some of the latter chapters get a bit wordy in a way that does not develop, enrich, or further the plot or characters but more a word count extension... THAT being said, the writing quality of this story is easily near the top of WebNovel... ... Another reviewer made a great point, "An interesting take on a game world and its mechanics. The 'balanced fortunes' system (for lack of a better name) that the world has is a surprising new take on how a game may be designed, at least in my reading/playing experience." ... ... The work feels like it has some of the flavor of "Ready Player One
I've read all the available chapters and this book is quite interesting. Though I am curious, I'll Uriel be mothering Jay? Since she's his guide, if so I would love to see her princess carrying him. Taking care of him perhaps? Though this is a good novel so far. I will be reading this novel in great interest.
Tsk tsk, this work isnt of the finest examples of perfection that i ever got a hold on this, hmm, in this early days of my life tsk tsk, how can people not read it for its title tsk tsk, what a waste not being seen by millons or billons ninetynillons of people tsk tsk what a wonderful novel tsk, i would like to say more but this, im bad with words tsk, tskbye
It's looks like the story is going on the right track.Ru Shi's character is quite amazing a teasing sister type.I am looking forward for the future.
Great novel. Love the story but if translation could improved then for me it is the best novel i have read in this year