I need Lou Lan
The book presents a rather uncomfortable reading experience. From the start, it's clear that the characters aren't biological siblings, but the dynamics between them, particularly during their pre-romantic interactions and during FL's teenage years, are unsettling. The mix of ML's attraction to his extremely young "sister," their inappropriate sibling behavior, and the constant labeling of their ages (younger sister/elder brother) after their relationship becomes romantic, adds to the discomfort. The author's repetitive emphasis on their familial roles feels off, especially considering they are now in a romantic partnership.
Additionally, I find it baffling how ML's grandmother and others allow ML's mother and original FL to cause chaos without any intervention. It would have been far more practical to invent an illness or send them to a secluded facility, given the circumstances. However, the story repeatedly lets these characters act out, diminishing the credibility of the plot.
The villain, original FL, is portrayed as delusional and incompetent, which takes away from her intrigue. On a positive note, FL herself is intriguing, with a strong and assertive affection for ML that matches his feelings. Had it not been for ML's early infatuation and the unsettling nature of their relationship, I might have rated the book higher, as it does have moments of entertainment.
The premise may seem far-fetched, a guy with an avatar merging Gandalf and Dumbledore suddenly finding himself in a game turned real, only to discover a shocking twist – he's transformed into a lolicon character. At first glance, it might not sound convincing, but surprisingly, the story becomes quite engaging. It's the thrilling adventures of an overpowered little girl, after all, who wouldn't want to dive into that kind of tale? Well, maybe some would, but let's be honest, in a Japanese novel, the focus is on the lolita aspect first.
This review isn't exactly swaying opinions, huh? Ultimately, people should just read for themselves and decide. So, I urge you, form your own judgment!
why did guys stop updating more than 14 chapter had been released on update novel
The anime title is different than the novel title, it’s the same for “That time I was reincarnated as a slime” In which the LN title is “Regarding reincarnating as a slime”
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Not so much, read "Paragon of Sins", then you'll see that more by the author than by the period.
Actually, at the start Overgeared is indeed trash but it gets better, then it gets worse again. I mean there are more cons to this novel than pros honestly but I regard it better than Rotsg. And why is that? I’ll tell you the main reasons:
First, everyone else except the Mc is actually a retarded. I mean this is the main thing I hate about this novel. Literally Enemies that initially demonstrate excellent planning and strategizing suddenly become inept when facing the MC, as if their IQ drops to the lowest possible level. This problem extends to bystanders too! I’ll make an example: a large guild appears and attacks the MC’s 's guild with an overwhelming force, or the MC shows up with a smaller than expected amount of forces. Every other person/bystander is like: Zero Wing is definitely going to be defeated this time! They don’t have any chance against this behemoth! Or they would be like: Sh*t, they bought only this x amount of people? They are idiots that don't know how tall Mt. T
Thanks alot for the new chapters?? and plzzz continue updating till the end ??. . .
Good novel in the genre. It does suffer from the often acclaimed rushed ending, more so then most novels I have read I must say. In fact I am now wondering if this story is just a prelude to another one. In any way it's over and it was an enjoyable read for the most part.
Chinese BL is different from wattpad where the novel here focus more on character building so it's rated G for me.
There's no difference on romance and everything aside from it is male to male. You can't even notice it as the story is good.
Congrats to the author, this is an excellent book! His other story is better but this one has dark touch for people fond on revenge.
What broke a relationship? All she did was break off an arranged marriage she never wanted nor had any decision on.Fully agree that its pretty disgusting that she only broke it off because she fell in love with a baby. Idk what the author was smoking cuz that is retarded af