where the bonus image?
This one was a really good read. It was adorable and the plot was nice. I didn't feel annoyed or frustrated one bit. I love FL's persona, lazy and indifferent but scheming and a strong fighter. Was just hoping that it was longer though and that FL could've fight more. Her fighting scene with the assassins with her two made was one of my favourite. I also wish they had more sweet scenes like kissing ones. ML was adorable too, love how he's not overboard with the ruthlessness and that he's loyal and actually does something when someone tries to flirt with him, cause in other stories, some ML would enjoy seeing their FL get jealous or mad and also author didn't made him have a Calvin Klein kinda model with perfect body and all. He was just good looking and have a good personality. Overall I absolutely loved and enjoyed this novel. Definitely worth the read!
Everyone love to find trouble with Pei Yunge, was funny lol
Arc 10... Gaming Love Story... rule number 1, don't ever ignore a pro gamer's message unless you want to to incite their interest... why? because pro gamers have their own pride ʘ‿ʘ
My honest to goodness review:
I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.
Thank you for this wonderful story, I really love this story it's captivating and I love the thrilling and suspense in it as well as the adventure I can't wait to the next update.
If possible I would like to give it 5 stars for comedy. Story development has room for improvement but this comedy old!
Nice book. I love the way you portray the events. Keep It up author. You are one of the best. ???
A one of a kind story, highly worth the read!Unique premise and compelling narrative lends give you a lot to bite your teeth into, cannot recommend this enough.I secretly think the author is a cultivator
this is one of my favorite stories very much the only bad thing being the authors schedule
Hey there! One of the Christian readers on this site. It's hard finding a good novel to read but this is one of my favs. This is a book for our time. In the last days, the end is near.
It looks like webnovel auto hides reviews with bad language in it? Had to change some stuff before it registeredHey author. Sorry if this seems like a scathing review.Seems? No, it is. This novel is so terr1ble, I wonder just how many review swaps you had to go through in order to get this rating. If you didn't do any review swaps, then congratulations, because this novel is so bad that you would have just done the impossibleWriting Quality: 2 stars. Each paragraph is over ten sentences long. Sentence flow is nonexistent. Cohesive dialogue? Never heard of it. There were several instances in a single chapter where the sentence count of a paragraph easily reached the thirties, sometimes even forties, in one huge infodump or the other. 2 starsStability of Updates: 2 stars. Don't get me wrong, the updates are consistent. Which is why I gave it two stars instead of one. This author piles ten chapters on the reader, every sixteen days. Imagine you, a reader, getting an update for this novel. You've forgotten the plot. You've forgotten the characters. You've moved onto other novels in your life. You don't want to experience reading through ten tedious chapters, sift through all the story pieces the author brings back in their terr1ble chapters. For more information on 'terr1ble', see the writing quality star rating. 2 stars for both.Story Development: See if I care. You tell me. Try to read at least ten chapters of it. I'll pay you ten bucks to summarize the story for me. Tell me how much of your life you spent trying to decipher the author's page of infodump.Character Design: 3 stars. Generic Medieval plot, hiding under a pretense of originality. But I don't have time to play house with it.World Background: 2 stars. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Infodump. Did I ever tell you that some sentences are over thirty sentences long? This novel's world, no, *any* novel's world isn't interesting enough for a reader to sit through a thirty sentence paragraph explaining the rinky-dink politics and intricacies of the world.Before I get ripped a new one in the comments, I suggest this: Read it yourself. Whether you are the author or a reader, just read the novel. Get to chapter five, and take this quiz. What is the plot? Describe the characters. How fun was your read? It doesn't matter if you can do the first two. The answer to the last one is no.And author, don't bother deleting this review.