First chapter is stunning and well delivered; love the cat and the humor added just at the right moments.Keep it up; you have a great future writing
Lets get to the point, i've read up to 101 chapters and this is my opinion about this novel.GOOD :-Mc is blessed, strong ,and talented in magic & crafting.-I like the the modern technology that he introduce to this magical world.-Kingdom building.BAD :-Everything is too smooth for mc, it feels unreal.-Not a single villain appear, all characters have a good personality.-The only thing he fight is a river slime, what is all that power for -_--Mc's citizen can get anything they want for free.The conclusion is,if you want to read a story of weak-to-strong mc that fight stronger enemies as he progressed, this isn't for you.if you want to read a story of crafting, and introducing modern world technology to magical world daily life, then this is for you.as for the kingdom building is below average imo, mc not even thinking of recruiting talented soldier and building strong army for his Nation. all he care is people with production talents.and it feels unreal that everyone let mc "do whatever he want comfortably" without anything bothering him.
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just started reading and.....I'll just read and see
Evel goes to a restaurant ..Waiter: Sir, What do You like to have?, We have many famous dishes..Evel: I want to eat you..Waiter: What!Evel: Slash...
The story overall has promise but dude the MC is a fcking dickhead for 90% of the story for absolute no reason. No wonder his irl girlfriend left him, the fact he had one is already a miracle.It's really hard to continue reading from his POV and cheering for him. It's not even he is a villain with charm, just insufferable, the kinda side character you would want the MC to bitch slap.
I want to see more keep up bro. The world have a massive potantiol but it need to be expanded more. The mc is now on the right track and he is no idoit so far so good. The power system is what make me want to read more and more the abillites are very very nice to read
Thanks for the good story, i really love the creative concept behind it but your writing quality does not do justice to this good novel, sometimes you misplaced the genders of the characters and the story development and world background is lacking, if you could describe both worlds backgrounds it would be really helpful, please keep up the good work even if you don't improve I'll still continue to read.
my first impression .. haven't read it yet
The story is so good for few chapters . I will wait for few more chapters to decide whether i read it further or not.
this is beyond what I expected, when will the story continue
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