Author I'd like to say I love your book and though this is a review section,.... do you not think we deserve a binge reading for all the chapter we missed
First off, I love the cover. I'd like to break it to you but the previous cover was just out of the question, it deosn't fit the story nor the title at all. You know the one with the teeth and stuff ( i forgot what it looks like) Anyways I'm glad that this story is back FINALLY!!! PLEASE PLEASE continue to update more and *coughs* This story is better than the "Tribrid sytem" Bye!!
Writing this review with 41 ch read so take that into account.Where you ever frustated, that main character is waiting for power up at least 20 ch or more? Well based on what i read so far, this novel for you. I already fall in love with the whole power system, main character and even some side characters(which is very rare). I can´t say this confidently but so far, this is at the top when you are looking for tags as: game system, magic, frindship or bit of comedy :)
Pretty good evil Mc novel gets bad a couple of times and then a nose dive in quality around ch 100 still a good read.
not that good especially towards the end he becomes completely hateful and romance is thrash
I really like the story so far! Can't wait for the updates. The grammar can be off sometimes but it's understandable as the author's native language isn't English. Keep up the good work though!
After reading the synopsis and the first three chapters, I can say that it's my lucky day. To stumble upon such interesting book. I really appreciate the way the author put the hook, it gave you the urge to read the next chapter. It was well written, I recommend to everyone who loves reading gangsta things to give it a try. You'll surely be fascinated.
this is abhorrent. disgusting. vile. bad. evil and much more whoever made this novel should be rotting in prison. any one who likes this pedophilia should not be living in a immediate 200 miles of a child.
This review is written at just over a hundred chapters, but this is one of my favorite things I have read in that (little?) length. The magic system (big surprise that there’s magic, given the title) is well thought out and intriguing, and allows for clear increases in power due to raw strength, but also leaves room for great strength through application and technique.As a transmigration novel (spolier from Ch1, I guess?), it does a great job of integrating past experiences and knowledge in a coherent way that gives the main character a unique spark in the world, but does not make him overpowered.MC’s quest for knowledge, sparked by his interest in magic, leads him into an engaging life that consistently leaves me, and the other readers, thirsting for more.One potential shortcoming of this novel is that many characters seem to show up, then be left behind. I say “potential” because if the story develops in such a way that they meet again, it would lead to some very dynamic and fascinating situations. But at the current point in the novel, the characters currently around MC seem to be solidifying as the author begins to delve deeper into MC’s relationships with the other characters.
This is a great story, it ought to be a hit. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）.
Ok I’ve got to admit that I’m a fan!!! I’ve tried reading a few gaming novels on WN, but yours is the first one I could seriously read. Your writing style is wonderful, and there weren’t any errors that I could pick up on. The dialogue also felt natural, and with the way you crafted Hao, it’s easy to see who he is and understand where he’s coming from. Great work!!!
When the title is wrong, you know the translator screwed up