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"Urban Tux" is super cool! The characters are awesome, especially Tux. He’s really relatable and has a lot of depth. The story keeps you hooked, there's always something happening. I love how it mixes action and emotions, makes it really interesting.The series talks about serious stuff like grief and growing up but still keeps things fun and entertaining. The characters’ relationships are great, they have good and bad moments, just like real life.The writing is pretty good, you can really picture what’s going on. The humor is funny and the conversations feel real. I like how new characters are introduced and how the old ones change and grow, keeps things exciting.There are a few things that could be better though. Sometimes I wish there were more details about the setting and a bit more background on some characters. But these are small issues and the series is still great.Overall, "Urban Tux" is a must-read if you like adventure, humor, and heartfelt stories. It’s a great journey and I can’t wait to see what happens next!
This book has an interesting start. Keep up the good work!
Fantastic world built and a strong plot. I love the characters and their interactions. The flow of the chapters is pretty engaging that I didn't feel bored at all. Though punctuation corrections at some places should be taken care of. Definitely a worthy one to add to your library.
The story is nice, I can't get a read on how the spaceship look like 37 chapters in. Too many mysteries which is not my cup of tea but I like how they put it together. My only issue is the MC is too nosey, he became a mech that's good but he is constantly trying to save people that ain't part of the job he takes and risks his life all the time like he's some superhero. Also the story is too concentrated on the first planet he crash lands about some terrorists on a wasteland planet that's not even probably worth to fight over
This is an amazing story. Straight to the point. I also like the fact that your writing is fluid. I hope you don't drag it unnecessarily and make it unintresting.
It's a pretty good read. Far better than most trial novels that get picked up. Although pretty generic with nothing new, it offers pretty decent quality. My only nitpick is that webnovel started to split 1 chapter into 3 mini chapters and then they increased it to 5-7 mini chapters. The best thing to do is to not use your coins to unlock chapters cause you're just getting scammed when 5-7 chapters are really just 1 chapter.
Good psycho mc calculative good s*x scene
How do I manage to get coins? Readers this author is really doing an incredible job with the "Devil and Witch series". But I just don't know how to unlock chapters.
"I could find out just by smelling it, by smelling the smells I could see the numbers.
That value is not too important because its never noticed by the teachers but still, they write those values.
This slave ... He just a slave, even he get abuse, i hate slave like him but, if i think much more, he just a victim. What he have done? Why do God put him in this creazy place? It's sound funny, he just good person and get abuse.
'GO GET THE CASHES' he was waken up from that runs to cashier and loots it while i search now dying 5 guys whit no strenght to resist after taking their wallets and 2 revolvers from them i says at them coldly 'Thats what u get laughing at me' saying this i runs to car Joy following behind me we quickly get in van and drives away it was night amd no custimers but after 2 min later i hear police sirens.... altough it was my first time killing i was calm after all i have power i will do whatever i want i dont want live life that works all of my youth and retire at old age life at all thinking this i see how much we got from this robbery hmm around 4k$ and 2 revolver not bad i give Felix Joy revolvers they accepted whitout hesitating seeing this im glad to have such underlings... we gotten back to base and i went to sit at near firepalace thinking white space
